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Shadow Bolt


I'm just a Brony in Texas. I'm a writer and sometimes artist in my free time.

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After returning from their lovely honeymoon, Princess Cadance and her husband, the newly crowned prince, Shining Armor, return to Canterlot to see that their home is not the same as they left it. More questions pop up when Cadance finds a mysterious pony hidden in her room.

Who is this pony? Where did this pony come from? What was the pony doing in the Princess of Love's room? And why is this pony being really affectionate with Cadance? Join Cadance as she finds these answers to these questions on this emotional roller coaster, that will have the Princess of Love question how much does she truly know about what her title represents?

Story takes place after The Element of Hate, so there will be references. There will be some grammar and punctuation errors,:twilightoops: but don't let that stop you from reading. I accept and appreciate constructive criticism.:raritywink:

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 11 )

Awesome chapter you are doing a amazing job i can't wait t see the next chapter:pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

Something Queen Chrysalis left behind, when she was disguised as Cadance?
Someone Cadance accidentally messed up with her love magic?

Cadance is remarkably calm about this.

I read this expecting instant clop in the first chapter, but this is actually even better. I love a good mystery!

Upvote & Fave.

5537359 Was think more along the lines of sombra's servant that's clearly slightly deranged subservient ... at least that was the impression I got

Hmm, perhaps it wasn't a spell, but years of mental conditioning on his psyche. I mean it makes sense, Here's my theory, chrysalis found him as colt, took him to the hive, change him mentally through the years, and up to speed to the now. Over all, not a bad story.

Huh, so Chrysalis had a little pet after all. Poor Razor Sharp, I feel for the little guy. :fluttershysad:

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You're going to be feeling him a lot throughout the story.

Rise from your grave, fic! Rise and seek the blood of the living!

All this time waiting has finally payed off, i just cant wait to see more of this in the future!

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