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Im_a_Turtle


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An old story teller recalls the epic tale of the old kingdoms that once ruled long before the time of the Royal Alicorn Princesses. An era of the pre-civilized/Equestrian pony age where "might was right" and order was constantly in battle with civil unrest and war. A single bastion of hope stood in the far north of what the country of Equestria is today. Nestled against the towering mountain, Gantrithor's Peak, stood the once mighty fortress of Tamilane the Greater.


All of this is directly before the Sundering of the Titans. Discord being one of them.

Please give constructive criticism.
Story Editor (Thank God): FanOfMostEverything


Characters:
Parthel Bookscratcher (Earth)
Kit CogGrinder (Earth)
Kochylis Stonebreaker (Earth)
SquiggyPie The Jester (Earth)
Pig (Piggy) Iron (Earth)
Ebleva Farsight (Pegasus)
Polemo Flash (Pegasus)
Habgier the Estranged (Unicorn)
Azura Elwind (Unicorn)
Vesuvius Thundermane (Unicorn)
and...Tod (Special)

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 3 )

Revised the 1st chapter greatly.

Please do give any feedback for this story.

:pinkiegasp: You must tell me his past!! I demand to know about the battles! I demand to know the history! I demand MOAR!!

Is it normal to take about a month just to correctly finish 2 chapters??! I don't know how you people can do this story writing stuff.:twilightangry2:

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