Human's double fantasy

by Darishon27x

Author's Notes

I finally got my Fanfic up, and i did get some comments. Im here to clear some things up. I am depressed in real life, and i am a cancer survivor. I did try to kill myself before. This will only be like, i dont know, 100 words long, so dont say this is a short thing. I realize that i am makeing my chapters really small, the reason is that i have school, and its alot. I have NEVER written a fanfic and never to the public so thats why im suckish at it. The next chapter will have more detail and will be atleast 500-1000 words long and will stay on topic for one thing instead of jumping everywhere. I thank you again for reading this and i hope i improve.

Comments

[Darishon27x]

542114 I really apreciate the constructive critisi-si-ccriti- thanks for the support! I will make my chapters longer and stay on topic!

[TheEnemyCube]

You know, I feel your pain about the depression. Well not really, but my mother died from breast cancer when I was about three, so I have been pretty much emotionally scarred. Which means pretty much all my emotions are now quite a bit more. So, keep going! I really do think this is pretty good!

[The sad mare]

bro its not a bad story the plot is good but the chapters are short its good but my only complaint is short chapters

P.S

hope you get over your depression soon stay safe

[greyyy]

depression sucks, man... btw it's criticism THANK YOU, GOOGLE CHROME

[greyyy]

anyways, I hope you get better, and cancer is tough, so I'll rethink what I'm reading, and for the first time, it's good

[Discorded Q]

542098 Correction, Bad fanfic writers are depressed losers, not all bronies.

[Hoghound]

Why do they always believe that suicide is the best way to go to Equestria ?

By that logic, why not slaughter the dragon to send it back to where it came from, its pathetic, wretched, miserable existence ? If he couldn't even get through life as a human being, why believe the outcome should be any different on a new body if he maintains the same psyche ?

[Khorne]

Being turned into a dragon. Dream come true.
Turned into a dragon GOD: HOLY SHIT YES

[Longshot]

542507 No 99/100 of the HiE Mary Sue self inserts are depressed emo children in order to give the character "more depth" or to make them seem less of a Mary Sue or in this person's case a Gary Stu.

[The sad mare]

545017 maybe he can start a new life?

[Slathbog]

549204

[AdaConda]

Oh no! Don't kill yourself! Don't ever attempt such a foolish act. Don't use a permanent solution to fix a temporary problem.

[greyyy]

561869 much better

[killer007]

update??

[Discorded Q]

1206160 Feces?

[yonalkaru]

cant believe this was so long ago, i hope you're ok dude.