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Chapters need to be a bit longer and like a little more details and spacing could help this story.
Good plot though
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S-sorry I can never read clopfics seriously.
*gets excited when she sees the Twimac fanfic and fails to notice the sex tag*
Even it being a clopfic... this is the worst romancing fic I ever read. :| You need to learn how to be more descriptive.
661031 ok. thanks. all comments and reviewing is acceptable.
660987 well... i copied and pasted my story from my word document bc this is on fanfiction.com too
661207 heh, yea. i was laughin too...
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661514 ...? is that good or bad? and HOW do you get those pics into comments?!?!
661551 Do not fear, I was quite happy with your story.
(Inserting images is quite easy. You simply copy an image url from a website (or google images) and then click the portrait on your comment toolbar. From there it's just a paste away!)
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661996 glad ya like it so far!
me as a happy human Cadence http://www.google.com/imgres?start=179&hl=en&biw=1369&bih=702&gbv=2&tbm=isch&tbnid=M-4q2_cROdPW9M:&imgrefurl=http://disney.go.com/create/art/2gs11k6WSQUo00001004wzo0-h-5c987c&docid=daCh5LK3RTAiwM&imgurl=http://n7ugc.disney.go.com/item/Yalipink/814_2gs11k6WSQUo00001004wzo0-h-5c987c-as/Human%252520Princess%252520Cadence__600_450_q50.jpg&w=600&h=450&ei=PEDET6noNKSK2gXtkY10&zoom=1&iact=hc&vpx=868&vpy=155&dur=2392&hovh=194&hovw=259&tx=179&ty=130&sig=103943528612533940272&page=9&tbnh=156&tbnw=208&ndsp=25&ved=1t:429,r:23,s:179,i:54
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a little rushed, but a good premise keep at it
I suggests you SLOW THE FUCK DOWN! your plot is going to fast
used the term 'service' too much, which was to say, only twice, but the term is not one to be used often, Big Mac would not say "ah'll pleasure ya more tommorow" he would be a bit more subtle, but It take it this is your first, so I am not going to say your a bad writer, just new
662968 mmkay. im gonna keep that in mind next time.
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cant do pictures?
dude copy the URL
667017 thats what i tried... -_-
Short but very good so far.
677378 thank you! I support all clopfics. Glad ya like it!
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I like it
662942 need moar