Chapters need to be a bit longer and like a little more details and spacing could help this story.
Good plot though

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S-sorry I can never read clopfics seriously.

*gets excited when she sees the Twimac fanfic and fails to notice the sex tag*

Even it being a clopfic... this is the worst romancing fic I ever read. :| You need to learn how to be more descriptive.

661031 ok. thanks. all comments and reviewing is acceptable.

660987 well... i copied and pasted my story from my word document bc this is on fanfiction.com too

661207 heh, yea. i was laughin too...

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661514 ...? is that good or bad? and HOW do you get those pics into comments?!?!

661551 Do not fear, I was quite happy with your story.

(Inserting images is quite easy. You simply copy an image url from a website (or google images) and then click the portrait on your comment toolbar. From there it's just a paste away!)

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661996 glad ya like it so far!

me as a happy human Cadence http://www.google.com/imgres?start=179&hl=en&biw=1369&bih=702&gbv=2&tbm=isch&tbnid=M-4q2_cROdPW9M:&imgrefurl=http://disney.go.com/create/art/2gs11k6WSQUo00001004wzo0-h-5c987c&docid=daCh5LK3RTAiwM&imgurl=http://n7ugc.disney.go.com/item/Yalipink/814_2gs11k6WSQUo00001004wzo0-h-5c987c-as/Human%252520Princess%252520Cadence__600_450_q50.jpg&w=600&h=450&ei=PEDET6noNKSK2gXtkY10&zoom=1&iact=hc&vpx=868&vpy=155&dur=2392&hovh=194&hovw=259&tx=179&ty=130&sig=103943528612533940272&page=9&tbnh=156&tbnw=208&ndsp=25&ved=1t:429,r:23,s:179,i:54

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662968 mmkay. im gonna keep that in mind next time.

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cant do pictures?

dude copy the URL

667017 thats what i tried... -_-

677378 thank you! I support all clopfics. Glad ya like it!

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I like it