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Dubya


Stay in School Kids

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cops is filmed on location with the real mares and stallions of law enforcement, all suspects are innocent until proven guilty in a court of law. 

(Rated teen for language)
(This is supposed to be funny, please don't be offended any way by it)
(I may add new chapters if i feal like it.)
(proofreaded and edited by banana prince.)

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Comments ( 3 )

Very good story, Really made me laugh in some parts:rainbowlaugh: ,however for constructive criticism, I would advise that if you want to specify the type of pony, to include it in your description of the character rather than stick it on at the end.

For example instead of saying

A brown stallion(who was a pegasus) known as Sheriff Brown

use "A brown pegasus stallion known as Sheriff Brown

This entire thing reminds me of Reno 911. *thinks for a second* Equestria 911!

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I was thinking the same thing it was something out of Reno 911! lol

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