Based on a story by Richard Connell, A story about the sinking of a boat and how a seemingly unescapuble end can turn into a new beginning but not all will live to see it.
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Desperately needs an editor.
I'm assuming that you're trying to say "dangerous" in your title?
The word "bout" is not the same as the word "boat".
Spellcheck is your friend; use it.
What do you mean to express here? Is that a title? Else it's plain wrong.
The most dangerous pony.
The dangers of most ponies.
Ponies in danger.
<-Pick one of those.
5466534 better?
5466522 im waiting on him now
5466607 define 'underage'.
5466789 I don't know, you tell me what this story is about not the other way around.
As I said, I have no clue what you are trying to shift the focus on with your title.
If you write about Pinkie Pie turning into an elephant, you use titles like:
Is this story about a pony, who is dangerous (as in threatening, or daring?)
-> The most dangerous pony
Is this story about a dangerous situation, a catastrophe possibly?
-> The greatest danger
Is the story about ponies in a dangerous setting?
-> The ponies in danger
You have to choose a title that fits what YOU want to write about, the center of your story.
Judging by
That description alone seems to elaborate the focus of your story, which is to say the event of a sinking ship, a catastrophe similar to the fate of the ship "The Titanic", and the ponies who will have to deal with the situation.
Now depending on what exactly happens after the sinking and if you want to heavily put your focus on the aftermath, for example being stranded on an island, you may use titles like:
If they are stuck on a lifeboat on open waters the entire story long, titles compared to:
are appropriate.
5466826 the title is based of a another story 'the most dangerous game' and will share a similar tone. Those are good chapter titles I may use latter. Also I may change the title title when I'm done with it.
5466853
The fact that you changed "The Most Dangerous Game" to "The Most Dangerous Pony", i.e. changed the implication of the title completely while keeping the promise, tells me everything I need to know about this story.
Going right through the emergency exit here.
Useful advice: Know your tools before starting the craft. In this case: grammar, punctuation and other basic knowledge of writing in general.
5467037 I think like a lot of crafts it will just tack practice and commitment, I will try harder