Hey guys! It's me, finally huh? Sorry for not having been on a lot, I didn't mean to make you all wait so long ;). But now I'm back and I'm WAAAY better, so let's get down to business!
It is their first night together after centuries of being apart . As Tia happily rejoices, Luna seems troubled. To her, the backstory of Nightmare Moon has pieces if the puzzle that don't fall into place. Tia tells Luna the true story, and the two sisters are finally , truly trouble free....
So far the first book I've decided I will have a sequel to. Based off a comic that was four parts long.
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I hate it when auto-correct changes "of" to "if".
And that completely defied canon. Oh well!
Sorry to be blunt, but this was mediocre at best. The writing and sentence structure isn't that good, and the dialogue is pretty bland.
The only thing that saves it is the plot. I'd like to hear more about this "Maisma".