• Published 27th Dec 2014
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The Truth - Cheshire Grinn



After Luna is freed, the Princess of the Night feels in satisfied with the story of how her hatred turned her into the demon others were scared of. Celesta finally decides to crack and tell her sister the Truth.

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The Prequel to the Sequel.....

There were no more tears or pain. No more loneliness or fear. No eternal darkness. Everybody was now guided by joy. The two sisters were safe and sound, happy and more easy to become friends with. But why? Why had the story hardly affected the sisters, bringing destruction yet again upon the land? Why were hardly any questions if this tale? Was Luna really yet again trusting the word if Tia after the lie that had replaced the truth? And what was the reason for all this? All the answers seemed unanswerable except for one: Luna was devastated at hearing the true story, but she never told a single soul, so the answer was never printed and nobody except me the author know of it. It is sad, yes, but done secrets are stronger than other secrets and can wreak more havoc than others. Luna wanted nothing if the sadness that had happened during her corruption to ever happen again. Her secret was never told. This book us now 1000 years old, and the secret has been lost forever in time. But you, reader, know if the secret. Spread it to only the most trusted. You may find that kind of personality in only six. Those six will be blood if the ponies who represented the Elements. They will be able to save Equestria if the secret gets out and havoc happens. This may be a long Prequel to the Sequel, but it will explain the sequel better than the two sentences most Prequels have. And yes, Equestria stands fine now, but it may fall with the weight of the secrets destrusction. I count upon you to keep the secret. Tell none but the Six.


Signed,
FW.

Comments ( 1 )

I hate it when auto-correct changes "of" to "if".

And that completely defied canon. Oh well!

Sorry to be blunt, but this was mediocre at best. The writing and sentence structure isn't that good, and the dialogue is pretty bland.

The only thing that saves it is the plot. I'd like to hear more about this "Maisma".

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