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Luna at the bus stop

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The Diplomat #1 · Dec 14th, 2014 · · ·

A few grammatical mistakes here and there, and the format breaks the flow of the story, but overall this is a pretty interesting premise. Keep it up

CherryCreampie #2 · Dec 14th, 2014 · · ·

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Ehm, Yup. I almost forgot about the grammar.
Thanks for pointing those out! :)

CherryCreampie #3 · Jan 10th, 2015 · · ·

"This story is abandoned. It will not be continued."

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