After every single attempt to take over Equestria and failing due to the Elements of Harmony the villian's have finally decided to come together as one and take over Equestria together. It's up to the villains to get the ponies on their side. Even if it takes everything they have. When nopony goes to a celebration party, the villains find this as a opening to their plans. Will the Mane 6 be able to save everypony before it's too late or will one of them turn over to the dark side causing the elements to be ineffective?
(If there is anything throughout the story that you guys dont like please say so in the comments. This is my first fanfic and i want it to be really good!)
Chapters (7)
Looks cool, I order you to continue with this
Needs more conflict between going and not going and Pinkie got deprassed to quickly, make her dissagre with the voices
Heads up, we already know this and also try to make it... Better. Possibly less factual and more naritive based?
5318911 Thank you so much for the Critique!
I have fixed some things now by using you suggestions
continuity errors everywhere the elements are in the element tree and the library was destroyed plus sunset shouldn't be a villain because she was reformed but that's only minor
5320923 I know that the elements are in the tree and all but i dont really like the idea have having to use like rainbow power and all soo i just kept the elements.
This should be the banner for Villians Of Equestria, the pic I mean.
Can I haz a link?
5323097 http://knowyourmeme.com/photos/753553-my-little-pony-friendship-is-magic
A bit awkwardly worded sometimes, but other then that it's pretty good so far!
5325759
Thanks
Where's the new chapter at?
5378272 It should be out later today or early tomorrow. very sorry for the delay. I been really busy with schoolwork and sports. I Also been planning out what to write for the next few chapters to make up for the non updating.
5381921 Ok then. I asked cause of an email update on the story.
5382329 I must've accidently hit publish. If you get abnother email about a update it's correct since the chapter is now finished and published.
When will there be more
Opps