Draws the line at the end of Season 7.
Rainbow Dash has a mystery on her hooves when she takes Scootaloo to step on her first cloud, and the young pegasus goes right through it. It seems as though Scootaloo can’t walk on clouds at all. Could it be that the only bit of pegasus DNA in Scootaloo is her wings?
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Damn you pumping stories out like crazy!
5297788 These and the next two are actually a year old. I'm currently in the process of writing this year's batch of ten.
Stopped reading for lack of pacing and focus... but not quite bad enough to downvote.
Don't listen to Ocalhoun, the pacing is only a tad fast.
But, you could make the spaces between scene switches bigger to tell readers that you have moved.
Other then that, I like it.