• Member Since 16th Apr, 2013
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ThePristineEye


I exist, I do things.

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The desert is a desolate unforgiving place with a past shrouded in mystery. Any life in this unforgiving wasteland is an anomaly among even the life that reside in it.
A hero rises from the dust ridden lands of the Equestrian Desert, but in all honesty, there's not much left to save other than her own hide.

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I love futuristic stories. Reading some of your posts, it seems like you are hard on yourself. Don't be. Your ideas are really quite great. I am very curious as to Color Burn and how the naming system works, and...EVERYTHING! So much awesome is buried just beneath the surface of your writing, with a little bit of dusting and polishing, there is undoubtedly a diamond here. My advice for this and future works: Keep at it. :twilightsmile:

Desert Punk meets MLP, nice. Just needs a little polish and this could turn into something amazing.

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