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That Naga Pone


Hush now, quiet now..~

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Scootaloo was always the little filly that Rainbow Dash loved dearly, and Rainbow Dash was always the one pony Scootaloo admired fairly. Years have passed, ponies have aged, seasons have changed, and the weather has been controlled. This day, isn't like any other day that Scootaloo has passed. This day could almost be the worst day of her entire life, which the punishment is even worse than getting killed by the Headless Horse.
With Scootaloo in her juvenile age and grown to a young lady, she knows that Dash is going to give her lectures and a lot of tips on life instead of fun and games like they used to do in the old days. If this problem of hers doesn't work out, she wants to get in a hole and just die from sadness. She might lose her pride, she might lose her dignity,

Maybe, she'll lose one of the most precious stuff she ever had,
Rainbow Dash's Love for her...

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Wow man good story glad it turned out well for her what those colts did is serious business

Comment posted by RaylanKrios deleted Dec 29th, 2014

5311990 Yeah, I wouldn't have just told the principle, I'd have told the police. Rape is a felony.

Comment posted by Shinzakura deleted Dec 29th, 2014
Comment posted by RaylanKrios deleted Dec 29th, 2014

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Ooh, i knew i was missing something :facehoof:
Well, its all fixed up now. Hope you still enjoyed it :pinkiesad2:

And to all you ponies who read this, i just want to say,
Thank you, thank you to all of you readers!

Comment posted by That Naga Pone deleted Dec 29th, 2014

This needs to get edited. I'll be happy to help if you can't find an editor.

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You would? Thanks, i really appreciate it.
A PM might be sent to you soon for a first, expect it