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It is Nightmare again and the Clubhouse of Horror is back. For this creepy anthology story the Crusaders have brought a large audience with them, so they can listen to their terrifying tales.

Previous Clubhouse of Horror.
Clubhouse of Horror II
Clubhouse Of Horror

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 4 )

Man that was twisted loved it

Hope you all enjoyed this anthology story.

I did, very much so. The first one had a reused idea from the previous anthology, with the reveal that the protagonist is a murderer, but the lead-up to that reveal was great, despite already guessing it at first, you managed to stray my thoughts away from that and nicely managed to lead me on the wrong track. "The Silent Killer" then was the best of all the stories in here, you successfully managed to make Sour Grape look like the murderer of his son, which made the twist with the scarecrow completely unexpected. It's been a long time since a horror story shook me so much with a scary twist.
You definitely have a great talent for telling horror stories!
The last story did not have such a twist, but it shines with pure terror that was very effectfully executed, and it terrifies you by having such an unstoppable force just tearing everything apart and leaving no survivors, as well as by the ruthless and brutal way of killing it applies.
And, generally speaking, I like the build-up that they have invited foals now to listen to their tales, after they have done this two times already. It's a very engaging kind of fun to see them evolve and progress during the different parts of the series. Another favourite earned for this story.^^

Enjoyable,
The grammar issues, misspellings, and improper word usage from the first two entries are still present- but less so.
Quality level has been maintained from the standards set by the second entry in the series, if not exceeded.
A good set of tales.

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