Somepony Lost

by ContagiousCreation

Epilogue: A New Beginning

I sat on the sofa, regretting everything I hadn’t done to keep her with me. I saw the note she gave me on the floor, and picked it up. As I unfolded it, I was surprised at what I saw. It was a drawing of pinkie hugging me, not the purple stallion one. It was actually me. Above the drawing was written:

‘You’ll always be my daddy’. I just stared at it. I was so confused. Why had she drawn the stallion all that time ago if she acknowledged me as a human? I looked to the coffee table and saw my £30 whiskey, half empty.

“Might as well finish the job” As I reached for the bottle, the doorbell rang.

“Who the bloody hell is it n-”

I opened the door and was surprised to see no-one there. There was a cardboard box on the welcome mat. I picked it up. It was heavy, very heavy. I set it down on the coffee table. A label was taped text down on top of the box. I flipped it over, it read: ‘Thank you for everything, we are eternally grateful -Celestia’. I flipped open the box, inside was a little colt. Curled up and sleeping, he breathed softly, He was purple with black hair. He was just like the one in pinkie’s drawings. I lifted him out, and held him in my arms like I did when I first found Pinkie. He squirmed around, shaking but slowly adjusted to the cold and rubbed up against my chest, feeling the heat radiating from me.

“Now then, what shall I call you?”

THE END

Comments

[jazzie366 FLUFFKIN]

Wait a second, I think this story was already posted....

[Luna Aeterna Solutae]

Pastel-pink colored, in your short description.
Also in your long description it would be pink baby horse without the comma. You're talking about a baby horse that is pink, not a horse that is pink and a baby.

[Typhoon-Voidhog95]

are you doing a possible sequel when this is done

[Iamnotabrony456]

Um... i'm confused...

Read this in like 5 minutes and felt nothing.

I always wanted a Pinkie inspired MLD, but this just feels... short

Felt like i just read a newspaper article about another war in syria or something. I had no feelings at all. Just... empty.

Why was this Featured, again?

[chrismonteith]

Interesting

[The Dead Account]

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[Thunder Roller]

Guys give him a break. This is his first fanfiction (I'm guessing sense he only has one story on his profile). No one starts out as a pro and he should be encouraged for his efforts. Keep going dude!

[ContagiousCreation]

5596732 Thanks, man. No-one else it cutting me any slack.

[ContagiousCreation]

5595646 If you're implying I copied MLD, than yes, I was heavily Inspired by it.

[ContagiousCreation]

5595710 Actually, it is finished, but I'm open to any final edits before it's marked 'Complete', also I might do the sequel following the life of the colt at the end if this story gets popular, if not I'll make a new story.

[Thunder Roller]

5597979 No problem man. I started out just like you. It just takes practice.

[jazzie366 FLUFFKIN]

5597980 Actually no, there was one that was like this. Same kind of plot and what not, but yours is different, and they didn't find Pinkie Pie in a trash can. They found Applejack somewhere instead.

[FluttershyFan84]

Nice parallel between my little dashie and the double rainboom video. maybe there can be more with Nathan actually being invited to Equestria?

[ContagiousCreation]

5608530 Finally, someone picked up on the reference!

[ContagiousCreation]

6571409 100% Correct there my Friend. I was heavily inspired by that absolute gem of a story.

[Sparda_killer_247]

I have one question.... how much did you spend for that cover art. Cause I don't think it was worth for what this became.

[Kentavritsa]

If not in this story, but will there be any kind of continuation, about what happens to Nathan and his new foal?
5598573
Applejack?
Could you link me to the story?
5598530
We all started there.
5608530
That could be a refreshing breeze.