Lost Canvas, a rainbow mane and tail unicorn, moves to Ponyville, but no one told him about how much louder the place can be sometimes compared to were he lived before.
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Spell check your work before you submit it. There's spelling mistakes in both the long and short description that made me not want to read it.
Poor Pinkie Pie!
I think you're writing has a lot of potential, but as stated before, spellchecking would be a good thing to do, as well as some proof-reading. If you don't have a program with Spell Check (I don't currently, Open Office says everything is spelled wrong since I last updated it), you can always use Google Docs. Docs is also a good program to use, if you ever want to take on a beta reader.
Best of luck!
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This can turn out to something good. Just watch your spelling a bit.
To be honest, I read a lot of first fic lately. And this is actually one of the better I found.
Keep it up. I'll keep an eye on this one
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I didn't really notice my spelling. I tried to cover it all. Meh. No one can get it all the first time.
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I'm not good with digital art okay. I'm better at just drawing it out.
4961846 that's true. I remember the time that my spelling sucked... wait... it still sucks
Could I redraw this?
4962328 sure
It's a good story, but it's riddled with errors. Misspelled words, and bad punctuation. Other than that, it's really good!
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I'm not the best writer anyway. and no one to proof read so :P
4964345 if you like, I could. I have two more open slots right now.
4964393 Sure I wouldn't mind that.
Why not have Lost go to a welcome party hosted by Pinkie? (Or Cheese Sandwich)
Applejack is a bit easier than you might think. For example, just read a few of the fanfictions with her in it. I specifically am not good at that, but rather how Luna talks. Good day to you, good sir.
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Well I covered that bit in part one. And I'll look threw some fics for that.
5256041 Don't you mean, "Through"?
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I'm tired