Gummy is such an amazing pet! The best pet in the world actually! Yet Mr. and Mrs. Cake, and even my friends are acting like big worrywarts. I don't know why they're being such party poopers all of a sudden!
Pinkie is hiding a secret, a BIG secret. Shes never told anyone exept gummy. But now, to eliminate the risk of hurting her friends forever, the truth my finally have to come out.
Spitfire and Soarin were just accepted into the Wonderbolts, but must practice and train before they can start any shows. This means the two newbies will have to spend a lot of time together and get to know each other.
4829692 Thanks for the opinion. I love hearing what people think and what they're opinions are. It was definitely a risk doing only internal thoughts, and for you it wasn't worth it. To others though, it may be a good thing.
Comment posted by Inquisitor M deleted Aug 23rd, 2014
Wow. I can't wait to hear the dramatic reading for this. Btw, if I ever hit the lotto, I gotta remember to get a hold of Morgan Freeman to read this.
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Haha thanks :)
A good write, but stories with only internal stuff going on kind of turn me off. Call it a matter of personal preference. I give it a 6.5 out of 10
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Thanks for the opinion. I love hearing what people think and what they're opinions are. It was definitely a risk doing only internal thoughts, and for you it wasn't worth it. To others though, it may be a good thing.
Nice, quick read.
To be honest I was hoping (at the beginning) for a twist: Gummy was all drama-queening while Pinkie only went shopping or something. ;)
Keep up good work, this story deserves more attention.