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LillysUnicorns


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Pinkie Pie's parents want her to come back home, so she obediently does, needless to say she will greatly miss her friends and life in Ponyville. This is a short story about Pinkie Pie saying goodbye to her life in Ponyville and her life afterwards.

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Comments ( 15 )

That is just sad... Wow, when you said 'that there was going to be a dark twist' I didn't know it would be this dark... :pinkiesad2: oh man... :twilightoops:

Well, I will like this story for you! :twilightsmile: Moustache! :moustache:

Nice. That ending was incredible.

EDIT: I liked this enough that when I clicked the like button, it went up twice.

(Yes, I understand the actual reason why it did, but I just like to think it was because I liked it enough)

Great story. Jeez, do I feel terrible for being one of those people who doesn't cry unless they're in actual pain. It was an awesome story, but the grammar... I could edit for you if you'd like :pinkiesmile:

2711865 Sure :) if you really want to haha. I would greatly appreciate it.

2712830 On it in a few minutes, I'll message you when it's done :pinkiehappy:

It was a good story, but I mean...:fluttercry:

I don't know what to feel, really! Sadness?

Yeah, that seems about right...

:raritycry::fluttercry::raritydespair::applecry:

So all the show was a dream?

Ah man you get more depressed as you remember what you went through with your friends. (As pinkie)

Feel time.

Sun

That was beautiful!!!!! Though I did cry at the end :twilightblush:

:facehoof:
That was pretty bad, I'm sorry. The only memorable part was the picnic, but the waking up part was just too awkward, and it really made me feel disoriented.
Other than that, it was a very plain story with not much depth whatsoever. Why not talk about her actual life? That would have been interesting!

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