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Metal Fight Maru


Story writer addict since age two. FIMFiction writer addict since whenever the heck I joined.

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Twilight Sparkle, a goody goody bookworm and high school graduate is ecstatic to attend Ponyville University. Until a freak accident that wasn't her fault gets her kicked out of college and she is forced to live with her aunt and two cousins until the accident gets cleared up, which could take a very long time. But here's the catch: she has to get a summer job to earn her stay. At the cafe she works at, she finds friends, love, and opportunity.

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Comments ( 22 )

You are awsome did u base this off of another fan fiction? If so which one? I promise I'm not trying to be rude

6088960 I actually didn't. :twilightsmile: It may have been inspired by one I just happened to come across, but if it did I can't remember. And no need to say that, I know it's not rude!:raritywink:

6088987 And, by the way, thank you for the compliment! F4f?

Is her love Flash Sentry by any chance?:duck:

Define "not manly", and why would any adult give a damn about it?

...Why. Why bother getting obviously wrong banner? The whole POINT of banner is to show a message. If the message is wrong to begin with, why would anyone sane want the banner to begin with?

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So far... not good. Lack of common sense is... rather palpable throughout this story.

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Um, thanks for the advice.... I'm kind of an amateur I guess...:pinkiesad2:

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Refrain from the cursing and hate, please and thanks. And, I just wrote that because I knew SOME super fan would question it, but it turns out some fan would do kind of the opposite, I guess. Anyway, it doesn't really matter, does it? And if you don't like it, don't read it.

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Oh no you don`t.

You come here, to public forum, post your... thing for everyone to see, then have the gall to tell me "you don`t have to read it"? For crying out loud, what`s wrong with you? You expressly invited everyone there is to come and give you their honest unvarnished opinion about your effort. If it is unflattering, then perhaps you should consider the possibility that you need some drastic improvements done before you commit to such a venture, hm?

Enough. If your efforts provoke people`s ire, look no further then yourself for the root of it. For as long as you`re willing to dismiss any criticism as "rude and hate", you`re doomed to failure. Unless you learn from it and make an effort to accept it gracefully, there is no escape from mediocrity for you.

When will twi meet aj???!!

When is the next chapter out???? I love this story :pinkiehappy: :pinkiehappy:

6113004 I have returned from the dead...
Look, I REALLY don't want to get into an argument with you. You made valid points, and I admit I'm not the best at this, because I'm still learning.

6232682 Thank you! :D
Sorry I haven't updated in so long, a lot has been happening. I will update soon!

6118036 Patience, young padawan :trollestia:

Story is at top of the recently updated list on 11/19/2015, every chapter is date July of 2014... seems legit.

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Its ok. I see you put alot of energy into each chapter :pinkiehappy: :pinkiehappy:

6650831 XD
Sorry, I don't know what that's about.

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