Divergent/MLP Crossover.
On the day of the aptitude test, Twilight Sparkle gets Dauntless. She didn't want to, she wanted to escape her Erudite home and her strict mother, but not like this. In her head, Twilight always got Candor. She was supposed to choose Candor and become a successful lawyer. That's what was supposed to happen. But at the choosing ceremony, she just can't keep her hand away from those burning coals...
Applejack lives in Candor with her abusive father, and can't wait to leave. She's obviously built for Dauntless, and that's what her aptitude test said. But it also said Candor. And Abnegation. At the choosing ceremony, she doesn't think. She just cuts her hand and blood falls on the burning coals.
In Dauntless, Applejack and Twilight Sparkle meet. They immediately hit it off, and become good friends. But soon, fear landscapes start up, and they start asking questions. How come Twilight's test said Dauntless, but her landscapes say Divergent? What are those voices Applejack is hearing at night? And what does "Darkness is coming" mean?
So many questions, and the answers are all in this story! Read on, bronies!
(Other characters include Bic Mac, Shining Armour, Fluttershy, and Trixie.)
Three points:
> The pacing is faster than a bullet.
> Is there any reason why Shining Armour and Twilight/Big Mac and Applejack aren't related in the story besides for the sake of the plot?
> There are parts of the story that are better off shown than told.
If you're going to write a crossover it's best not to just copy the source material. Make up your own test etc... maybe have twilight not be an exact copy of Beatrice.
6113835 Don't worry, she's not.
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> Sorry, I'm not the best at writing long chapters.
> What other reason do you need? I saw them as very masculine ponies and I wanted them to be my Dauntless instructors.
> Example?
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You couldn't just make a character from the show and alter their personalities for the sake of the plot. You could come up with some OCs.
You should just disregard my statement on that - at least for now.
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Um... thanks for the feedback I think