After a long time, I decided I would try to ship a few ponies. This was started before Dresses, but isn't quite as popular even though I enjoy writing it more. Please remember to leave likes and comments as well as favorites! Thanks everypony
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You posted part 1 of a multipart fiction and marked it as on hiatus?
I do hope the 'on hiatus' was a mistake. This is looking interesting and I'd like to see more. Especially since I so rarely see Octavia shipped with anypony other that Vinyl Scratch.
Oh god why do people that take a long time to write always make the story's that
1)end in cliffhangers
2)ARE EPIC WIN
Oh sweet Celestia! Everypony who commented and faved this, I have great news.
I love you all so much.
I marked this story as on hiatus because I rarely work on it seeing as I have 2 times as many views and 3 times as many ratings on Dresses. I suspected that it was no good, and ponies didn't want to read it. I'm very glad to get such lovely feedback, I'll give you another chapter tonight, and I'll make sure to begin work yet again on it.
It really does help knowing that my work is appreciated and even loved by ponies like yourselves
When I looked at my notifications and saw how many faves and comments I had, I really shed a few manly tears
Wow!What a crazy twist,I didn't see that come in.Its just sad Rarity's hard work.
I really like your work, and i think this has potential to be a really good love story.
But i just need to point out that you wrote "Sweaty Bell", and her name is Sweetie Bell. Also a couple of other spelling errors but i just needed to point that out.
456126 Thanks, I started writing this before knowing that there were exact ways to spell names (I have since fixed it) and I know I should go back and fix typos and other spelling errors, lately I've just been pretty down, and it's not work I enjoy doing if I'm sad.
Thank you for your input though, I really appreciate it.
Let's keep this simple >.> I like Octavia, I like Rarity, and I like this fic! Great job keep up the good work!
Formatting could use some work (indenting paragraphs and separating them with a blank line, the latter being important when the story is downloaded).
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thanks for bringing this to my attention!
Ah, I see. I hadn't payed much mind to how this was being uploaded or if it kept the same format. I'll see what I can do in Chapter 5 to help, and then hopefully fix the last 4 when I have time (if it's difficult)
This is mah new OTP. <3
Can't wait to see the next update. *Q*