Life has been here for so long, and so is death They go together, they are in harmony. Yet still, the living is scared of death. What will you do against it?
Stories are dreams on screen~
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Okay, it was a fair story. Having that said, I felt you could have built it up a bit more plot-wise. Solid 6.5 out of 10.