(WARNING: This is intended to be a Creepypasta. You have been warned...Also, if you dislike, please comment a reason so I can work to fix the issue...)
(UPDATE: Writing has been improved and there is an additional scene. Sequel is on its way, official title is "Sarcastic Applejack Returns: Liars Never Prosper"
What would you do if someone you trusted and expect to be open and honest, betrayed you? After a horrible storm, an Apple family member passes away, but how will Applejack cope? Was it truly an accident? After discovering secrets her sanity begins to spin.
Need more! This is really good, id like to see what she would do if one of her friends lied too her :S
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Thank you so very much! That would make for an interesting sequel! Definitely will keep that one in mind!
yep,your soooosarcastic
love the story
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I so glad you liked it! If I get some more likes I'll consider making more, but it's very time consuming! Thank you for reading!
Woah, now that's a dark story! Since this is considered a Creepypasta by you, it really does feel like one! Tragedy, gore, darkness. NyaLittlePony, you certainly did a great job! This story had a little bit of the Purple Unicorn Syndome. But overall. I really liked this story
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Thank you so very much! That made my day! I'm so very glad you enjoyed it! It took time and I worked really hard!
i thought it was okay.... needed more Ummm... idk Sadness or umm MORE GORE!!!
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Thank you for your opinion. I tried not to go too overboard with the gore...Oh well, I tried...
Hmm...this is a good story, but I wish there was more though. Are you planning to do sequel of this. because I would like to know what else happens next. Would insane Applejack kill more ponies or would she be caught? And what about Big Mac? ^_^;
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Thanks! There might be a sequel....Hmm....I'll have to think on that! I'll let you know if I make a sequel :)
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OK, then. That would be great, if you did decide to write a sequel to this. Because truth be told, there's not nearly enough insane Applejack grimdark fanfics, then there are Pinkamena fanfics , and they're dime a dozen on both FimFiction and FanFiction.
So....BRING ME MORE SARCASTIC APPLEJACK, FRIEND! LOL!
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If you insist, darlin'
Eeyup.
I will never look at Granny Smith the same...
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After I wrote this I couldn't see her the same way either
Interesting... Please... do go on... I find this story... intriguing.
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Sequel is on it's way darlin'
Don't know what to say. It is that good. I found it interesting to see what would happen if Applejack went insane. Can't wait for the sequal.