A nightly stroll between hearts twain
A short story I wrote to try to get started with my main story again. It didn't work out, but at least I finished this one.
It's one of those sappy stories, wanted to try and see how well it would turn out.
I hope you enjoy the read, any comment is highly appreciated.
Just a short thing I threw together, wanted to try writing something without any dialogue but with only feelings.
I have no idea how it went.
Comments and critic is highly appreciated.
I liked it. <3
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I'm happy you liked it
Nice work Fain! Great attention to detail and amazing description, though I did notice a few vocabulary/grammar issues that I can point out to you if you wish...? All around, great job though! ^_^
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Point away, my grammar is horrible and should be fixed ^^
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I'll do it in a few hours when I find the time, a bit busy now, sorry!
I really liked it! Great one-shot. =) Very well worded, I think.
Shouldn't this have a Luna tag as well?