Huh... I was expecting him to have some time with all of them before the end. You know, like he'd get to know them each on a unique, personal level, before the harem end comes about. But I suppose getting on one's good side before something happens is also good.
Great update and fantastic cover art! Interesting that the girls are serious about having kids, Dusk is sure having a tough time. I have a feeling things will only get worse until they get better.
And Being Emo- er - Romanc- Friendship Yeah! Friendship Conquers all... I think... or was it having hot sex while the mare was in season to make Frenemies with Sex Benefits?
7264013 I am not even sure myself and I wrote the damn thing... The morale of the story will come soon... hopefully both sexually and literally of the meaning.
Huh... I was expecting him to have some time with all of them before the end. You know, like he'd get to know them each on a unique, personal level, before the harem end comes about. But I suppose getting on one's good side before something happens is also good.
Wait. Its going to be over soon?
Whelp....... Was really hoping for more. Shame really. Quite liked this.
7238985 This story yes, but more is to come.. alot more!
7238953 Dont worry, what I have planned will give you more info on them!
7238993
7238998 Ah, that's a relief.
That ending was so sweet.
Dat Cover Art
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Great update and fantastic cover art! Interesting that the girls are serious about having kids, Dusk is sure having a tough time. I have a feeling things will only get worse until they get better.
One down, three to go.
Intereting twist.
I LIKE IT!!!
7239313 I commissioned it for him, and just where did you find that image of Octavia?
7238998 umm... You miss gendered them at on point.
7241877 /mlp/ Art by Reiduran.
And Being Emo- er - Romanc- Friendship Yeah! Friendship Conquers all...
I think... or was it having hot sex while the mare was in season to make Frenemies with Sex Benefits?
7264013 I am not even sure myself and I wrote the damn thing...
The morale of the story will come soon... hopefully both sexually and literally of the meaning.
7265781
Whatever the case. DUSK go stick it in them! Sexually and metaphorically
I say convince them all to really love him, if an eternal night goddess can learn to love...why not them?
I LOVE THIS HAREM!!!
7238993
is this confirmation of a a sequel ?
7428968 Yes two of them actually though they will come later on for a yet to be fully planned series.
Two years on, and it's still unreadable.
7525331 two years going and people still get off on it with little trouble. Maybe it's your end of the stick? Malfunction?
7578225
I'm an editor. It's my job to read through poorly-written sentences and translate them into proper English.
This is complete nonsense.
At the very least, the first few paragraphs. It may have become more understandable later in, but I couldn't get that far.
7612932 is that bad?
Poke... this thing still on?
7578225 update?
OMG I loved all of this ,I can't wait to see what happens next.
I'm sure it's comedy... I did not laughed a single time. I mean, since when is rape funny? I don't get it. It's well witten, tho.
7578225 I want more of this but I think it may be dead
7897222 not dead just stuck
I hope there will be more of this story again.
7912624 http://www.fimfiction.net/blog/711072/four-villianesses-vs-dusk-shine-update-20#comment/4403695
Sigh.
Okay no wonder A LOT of mares want him (or stallion) dusk is sooo romantic, understanding, forgiving, Caring. He had all the mares want!