Well, if this is editing I'd hate to see the raw. I'm confused how does Dusk not know he's been claimed? Or how does Flutters know he was? If sent marking your mate it part of pony culture then Dusk would know, unless it's like a hicky. Then it shouldn't carry as much weight since Dusk was marked against his will, unless pony culture was Matriarchal at one point and stallions were or are subservient. I still don't know what's keeping him from telling spike and calling Celestia.
4703191 Nightmare threatened Dusk's friends if he spoke of it to anyone. I would be bragging about how I banged Nightmare Moon myself, but I'm not him. Not enough clop. And Fluttershy is so sad,, but it keeps my interest. Don't really care for clop related cliff hangers, whatevs. Keep it up, this is going to fun.
4704416 A threat of retaliation is only as powerful as the one who enforces it. If were talking Nightmare Moon, then the combined forces of Celestia, Luna, Cadence, and Dusk can easily beat her. The only thing that can stop him from seeking help is Dusk. If she was using some sort of powertrip to coerce Dusk into not blabbing then it falls flat. But as the author said there was some sort of magic used, I was merely disappointed that wasn't reflected in this chapter. While I look forward to the clop as much as the next I think that the story has a lot of potential and would like to see the author shine.
“I am the E! To the R! To the I and S! I’m the mistress to bring down all the rest! From the sun, to the moon and even you, You know it fucking sucks and this is true! Making it rain strawberry cream and cheese, Changing the world all around like a breeze! But this is what makes chaos fun and delicious, Bringing down the mayhem, for I am… ERISLICIOUS!”
Nice chapter.
I fucking don't even. This is amazing
hehehehe awesome. damn cliffhanger though, please update soon.
Memeasourus would be proud
4701271 I cracked up on that for some reson.
Nice.
Like just like
Well, if this is editing I'd hate to see the raw. I'm confused how does Dusk not know he's been claimed? Or how does Flutters know he was? If sent marking your mate it part of pony culture then Dusk would know, unless it's like a hicky. Then it shouldn't carry as much weight since Dusk was marked against his will, unless pony culture was Matriarchal at one point and stallions were or are subservient. I still don't know what's keeping him from telling spike and calling Celestia.
4703191 Magic for first part but I will explain the rest in next chapter.
4703191 Nightmare threatened Dusk's friends if he spoke of it to anyone. I would be bragging about how I banged Nightmare Moon myself, but I'm not him.
Not enough clop. And Fluttershy is so sad,, but it keeps my interest. Don't really care for clop related cliff hangers, whatevs.
Keep it up, this is going to fun.
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A threat of retaliation is only as powerful as the one who enforces it. If were talking Nightmare Moon, then the combined forces of Celestia, Luna, Cadence, and Dusk can easily beat her. The only thing that can stop him from seeking help is Dusk. If she was using some sort of powertrip to coerce Dusk into not blabbing then it falls flat. But as the author said there was some sort of magic used, I was merely disappointed that wasn't reflected in this chapter. While I look forward to the clop as much as the next I think that the story has a lot of potential and would like to see the author shine.
Chaotically erotic Eris is best Draconequus or hottest anyway.
There is not they're!
He's doomed
God help you dusk.
4723173 well they are near gods so.. and I think they will help inthere own wway.
4707444 No, He's *Le sunglasses* Screwed.
4734172 Dusk dude, you're screwed
4706335 Kaio- what?
you need an editor
OHHHH GOD ERIS IS IN THE JOB
Oh purr Fluttershy dun't worry if he turns them all good then maybe you can join .I can't wait to see whats next.
.....god help us all.....
Actually that's a good idea, imma do my own Krazy Khaos Kuddles club, and we're going to wear white hoods
Well, he's screwed. Pun intended.
Welp, time for some really chaotic sexings.
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Or worse, an army of Pinkamienas.
Oh my god that is priceless.