I was hoping that nightfall would destroy everything until spike stop him and made him rethink himself of what he was doing (like the one on castlevania when dracula and alucard fought until they reach alucard room and made dracula completely rethink his decision) and fled the scene while keeping the villainess powers for himself. But still this is a great story making princess cadance as a trump card to turn him back because I was not expecting that. Overall my opinion of the story was very high just a few mispelling that all you did a great job.
10161413 Not sure about Castlevania, but like I said, this chapter was done around 15 or 16... Cadence was always the one I had in mind because she got little hero time. I liked her what she could have been. I felt that she was neglected by the shows creators much like Spike or Luna. I wanted her to shine, even if it was for a bit. I am glad that this worked out, though I wished more people would comment. I enjoy all kinds but Im glad for the ones I get.
A beautiful chapter. No young colt's psyche could withstand torture of the magnitude Dusk recieved. Enjoyed reading Nightfall's madness and subsequent defeat, especially with Cadance's time in the spotlight. Poor Nightmare, the Orchestrator, Betrayer and Lover. At least that is how i've interperted my favourite Queen of the Night. I always enjoy tragic ends.
10168001 She was always my choice. I actually wanted to push further and have it so she gives her life just so she could save him but... this was at the time Flurry Heart was being mentioned so I left that part out. She was pregnant in the original draft before the reveal of Flurry. Actually the real pregnancy would have been the original FLurry they announced, I forgot the name... before they changed it to this name.
It's good to see you finish it honestly I have had a shit 3-4 years myself job wise and my escape is reading this is one of the stories I really hoped would finish one day and glad to see it is. Now to see what to do with oil fields being done.
You misspelled the number "four" in the story blurb.
Sees the story has been updated: Yay!
Sees the chapter “Dusk Falls”: Oh No!
Sees the story is still incomplete: Yay!
I can’t even read this for another half an hour at least and it’s already set me on a rollercoaster of emotions
10160029
Thats the april fools... NO EDITING!!!
neat
kinda feel bad for NMM thou, i think she was legit not happy with what she did
10160160
Yep, 1000 years of anger towards a single pony but 1 night with one pony and a thousand regrets.
Sad to see nightmare moon go
After reading this chapter, for some reason I imagined Nightmare in human form, happily holding Dusky's child somewhere... Is it weird?
Damm bro.
10160514
Yes it's weird, stop thinking humans
10160534
I know right?
I was hoping that nightfall would destroy everything until spike stop him and made him rethink himself of what he was doing (like the one on castlevania when dracula and alucard fought until they reach alucard room and made dracula completely rethink his decision) and fled the scene while keeping the villainess powers for himself. But still this is a great story making princess cadance as a trump card to turn him back because I was not expecting that. Overall my opinion of the story was very high just a few mispelling that all you did a great job.
10161413
Not sure about Castlevania, but like I said, this chapter was done around 15 or 16... Cadence was always the one I had in mind because she got little hero time. I liked her what she could have been. I felt that she was neglected by the shows creators much like Spike or Luna. I wanted her to shine, even if it was for a bit.
I am glad that this worked out, though I wished more people would comment. I enjoy all kinds but Im glad for the ones I get.
Please let nightmare come back she needs a happy ending and she carrys disks foal
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No promises
10162776
I think out of all of them she deserves a happy ending with dusk and start a family
10163776
In another time, yeah, it would be great.
10164122
Well can't wait for more
A beautiful chapter. No young colt's psyche could withstand torture of the magnitude Dusk recieved. Enjoyed reading Nightfall's madness and subsequent defeat, especially with Cadance's time in the spotlight. Poor Nightmare, the Orchestrator, Betrayer and Lover. At least that is how i've interperted my favourite Queen of the Night. I always enjoy tragic ends.
Definitely can't wait for another chapter.
10167975
Well the final chapter is coming and I hope to leave on a good note.
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Still, good choice on poor Cadance. She gets left out too much.
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She was always my choice. I actually wanted to push further and have it so she gives her life just so she could save him but... this was at the time Flurry Heart was being mentioned so I left that part out. She was pregnant in the original draft before the reveal of Flurry. Actually the real pregnancy would have been the original FLurry they announced, I forgot the name... before they changed it to this name.
It's good to see you finish it honestly I have had a shit 3-4 years myself job wise and my escape is reading this is one of the stories I really hoped would finish one day and glad to see it is. Now to see what to do with oil fields being done.
10168354
It was something to do with Skye
The name I mean.
10204888
Yep Skyla i just remembered
10167989
Now, when you say good note... You mean for everyone involved, even the villains?
10223054
More like an upbeat attitude rather then sadness. Friendship healing and all.
fuck friend you are the second person that made me cry with a mlp the first was laura fausto with the episode the perfect couple.
I really respect you
10274261
Thank you
Heh, Eris was cute.
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Was? Still is!
Damn, this got emotional suddenly... WHO'S CUTTING ONIONS!?