Tonight, you will hear a knock at your door. When you open it you will be treated to a horror beyond imagination. Your eyes will behold the equine form, dead and bloodied, for some reason you may never know reanimated by mechanical parts. The stench of decayed flesh, along with the inexplicable scent of cooking meat will flood your nasal cavity. Your ears will be assaulted by clanks and whirs of the crude cyborg nightmare.
This is Lyra Heartstrings, whom something terrible has befallen. If you turn her away she will surely be put out of her misery by police or military forces once reported. But if you take her into your care, she has a chance.
She may never know your name, see your face, hear your voice, but you can do the right thing.
Reference image: (NSFW GORE WARINING) http://robotwo.deviantart.com/art/In-search-of-bonbon-325736172
Written for /mlp/ on June 21st and 22nd, 2014.
Allow me to be the first to congratulate you for a story well done.
Beautiful... In a terrible way, but a beautiful story. I congratulate you, give you a thumbs up, and a favorite. And I would give you a spikestach, if this wasn't an iPhone and I could figure out how to add the emotion things in the comments.
well done mate
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You have to acutally WRITE the code-thing for said emoticon to use it.
For example: "moustache" with ":"'s at the ends would be spike-stache.
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Okay, now lets say I don't actually know any of these codes...
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Oh! Then I guess you could go to a user-page, press a icon and whatever text comes up (from pressing the icon) is your icon code!
Ex: : pinkiehappy : =
(no space)
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I'm glad you all liked it, and thanks for the positive feedback.
Happy to see my first attempt at this has gone well!
Interesting.
And then Anon was in bizarro off-brand bleach Equestria where everypony is a techmozombie for no reason
Meanwhile Neckbeardio reclaimed his portal in abandoned house and now he's gotten ponies nobody cares about like Applejack and Fluttershy.
Cool so far... I actually see this in my head
And not because my lyra decided to reenact it with tin foil
screwed up in a good way. this story is dark... very dark.
ok, ok.. not as dark as i expected it to be but i enjoyed it immensely. thank you for making it end on a good note, damn how my heart was dreading a dark ending that did not come.
good read, good read... definitely liking and leaving a fave.
I liked it
You are friends with Lyra Heartstrings!
STAY
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I'll give him three weeks... until his body explodes from massive doses of unshielded
cutness. Serously these ponies are more dangerous than a nuclear bomb being shoved into a nuclear reactor by a chain smoking Derpy.
death.
Warning long term exposure may cause permanent
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Kind of ruined from the fact her captors weren't caught and executed for their crime.