I'm a die-hard brony and whovian and I am going to try my hand at some fanfiction
It was a night like any other at Canterlot Castle, Luna was making her nightly rounds,raising the moon, helping her sister to bed, getting a bite to eat,and then attempting to have a decent conversation with somepony. Then she heard a groaning noise from behind a treeline a short distance away.She ran as fast as she could, was somepony hurt?
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4530669 I did enjoy
4530669 MORE
Bwahahaha!!!
4548266 thanks man !!! i will deffinitely write more
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4558989 ok but i do have some bad news ill have to put off writing the next chapter to thursday or friday because my brothers are here and i like to spend time with them
4549347 hey thanks for reading
Dats ok
4568716 ok just finished right the next chapter now im going to edit it and submit it.
4568716 ight man its published
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4569468 wut?
I thought Luna would talk a little lets say official or royal? And try to be more detailed if I recommend. Other then that I thought it was funny.
4571389 thank you for your help i will attempt that in the next chapter, and thank you for saying it was funny, i appreciate your help
4571389 ok i edited the last chapter tell if you think Lunas speaking is better
4569622 When i read the torture thing, I got mad I wanted to jump in there and become Hitsune Miku to get my happy ending key and get those villains off! lol sorry wrong comment lol
I'm sorry, I'm a whovian my self and
The doctor always tries "diplomatic" methods first
4574555 thats debatable, in the first episode of the reboot series he ripps the plastic mans arm off and blows up a relay on the roof
4574087 lol yea i can have a messed up mind at times
4576275 he had no one to teach him to be diplomatic for a while and changes through out the series
4577420 yes thats true but its still the doctor
4578796 hint hint... Sunshine and celery stalks
Changes throughout the series
4584492 yes,yes it does
ok the next chapter just passed 1000 words but it still needs more so expect it by later this week
4569385 I feel the story is ok but I have a problem with its detail for example Luna saying awesome I feel only pinki and dash would say something like that out of all of the main pony mostly luna I feel she would be the last to say awesome but all and all still pretty good.