A story that will have a few chapters. Hellboy somehow ends up in Equestria after fighting some bad guys. Normally he would just adapt until he would get home. But realized that time won't move fast enough.
The first chapter is a test to see if people will like the idea. I know there have been a few but I haven't seen any in a long while. I figured why not?
Helpful input is appreciated. If you have ideas on a next chapter or in how I can make this better. Please tell me.
If this gets too many down votes, I will leave it as a one shot until I get a better idea.
Chapters (3)
Genius!
This story is golden; though it could use some grammar modifications. It's still a pretty good Ideal story with a interesting plot line. I would love too see where this story is going.
Though, Word of adivice, Keep the story more detailing. Ya know? Include a scenery or something.
Also, Slow down a little the story seems as if its going by fast.
That's all I need too say right now
Keep up the good work.
-Windchester
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First of all, thank you. I have not received a good comment in ages. And I apologize for the bad grammar, I was never good at it.
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You should receive more acknowledgement for your work.(past/present/future)
Can't wait too see more.
Heck don't sweat it. Your grammar is really excellent.
If you want too see a glimpse of Horrible grammar......look at my stories.:-)
I await your stories and updates
-Windchester
Good job -salute-
I read this before making my account!!!!!!!
This is golden!
Sweet merciful. Pain... So much pain.... The writing.... It hurts!!!
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You say about a story written with no editor, no care and no writing skill. Also written almost 4 years ago.
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Sorry, I made the post out of impulse. In fact I have o idea what possessed me to... Let's just say madness. Sorry.
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It is quite alright. Honestly, I'm amazed people are still coming across this!
This is pretty funny