The TARDIS has gone a bit wrong, leaving The Doctor stuck in Ponyville until it recalibrates, or stops smoking, either is good. But a chance encounter with Applejack gets him dragged over Sweet Apple Acres! Sounds simple enough, and even The Doctor agrees it’ll be a nice change to the usual of saving the world, after all –what could go possibly wrong?
Doctor Whooves picks up a odd distress message from a little pink filly living on a rock farm. Curious he investigates, especially when moving shadows are involved!
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Shocking. Truly Shocking.
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It leaves me wanting more, but it really is fine if it is just a stand-alone. I don't recall finding any spelling errors (thought there may have been, my memory ain't the greatest), the story was constant, smooth, and, as The Doctor once said 'Everybody lives!'
Most fic-writers simply assume that Applejack, Big Mac, and Apple Bloom's parents are dead, and its is nice to see a fic that does not depict them as being such.
673600 Thank you, there was going to be a continuation, but I'll need a pre reader
I am, as far as I know, free tomorrow, so if you've got it done or mostly done, then I promise I'll have it read before nightfall and give you some feedback, if you like. If its not done and are still workign on it, thats fine. I've got stuff to write too.