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Not Cool Enough

The Cutie Mark Crusaders enter the talent show and Scootaloo is incarge of the choreography and is afraid that Rainbow will think its uncool and would no longer care about her

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animeyasha66

animeyasha66 #1 · May 29th, 2014 · · ·

constructive critisizam is greatly appreciated

NobleValor

NobleValor #2 · May 30th, 2014 · · ·

Well, your grammar and sentence structure could use some work. A cute little story, but I always thought that the way cutie marks worked is, if you are doing something for the purpose of getting them, you couldn't get them. (Like getting the Sorcerer's Stone from the Mirror of Erised. I know I'm a geek. ) (And personally, I always thought that Scootaloo's cutie mark would be scooter related)