Watch as your favorite characters are reduced to....you know I'm not sure what to call them. Anyway this is a VERY altered version of the show where I bring more adult elements and well.....you'll see.
I DO take suggestions for how you want to see me remake the show. I don't choose them by how many people liked the comment or anything. If I like the idea then I'll use it. If I don't like the idea I won't use it.
Contains quite a bit of bleeped out swearing.
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I find it difficult to believe that you're remaking both episodes, when thus far, the chapters barely make up the length of the script.
I get the feeling you're ripping through the two episodes as quickly as you can...
You should have Nightmare Moon be a gangster, and Luna just be a stereotypical black girl. Y'know, loud, obnoxious, etc.
4448232 Interesting....
I will think about that!
I recommend longer chapters.
Full of 'F' bombs. Geez, take it easy man. It's not fun when you abuse words! And cursing it's not an adult thing, you should know that. So be decent please. Man, I had so much expectation.
That story was awesome!
4448603 There was a warning in description. And the adult parts don't come in in till there are more then 3 characters (if you count the one that isn't even there in person. ) If you don't like fics that involve lot of swearing then don't read them if says in the description that they involve lots of swearing.
4449908 Glad you approve!
4449854 Sometimes ponies are the only way to express your emotions! <3
4448318 I made them to be short. If people don't like then.....oh well.
Some might chapters end up longer but I like them short. And as much as I want other people to enjoy the series I think it's a reasonable request to want to enjoy it myself. After all whats the point in making art if you don't you don't get to enjoy the art your self.
I know my work isn't for everyone. But I love it and at the end of the day that's all that matters.
So yeah. Anybody who is bothered by how short the chapters are or anything else.....that's my answer. I posted it up here so people could see and maybe enjoy something that is very me (This might bring on a onslaught of how I must not be a very good person, I'm screwed up, etc.) So if you don't like it then you don't have to. However if you coment on this saying why you don't like it, I am going to explain it. It's not saying you have to like it, it's just telling why I like it
Do you realize how f***ing silly it looks when you're eager as h*** to fill your story with profanity, but instead of spelling it out, you type a bunch of asterisks like a little b****? (Those words, by the way, were "fuck", "hell", and "bitch". See how easy that was?) And in addition to your willingness to actually spell the words you seem to want to use, you need to work on your grammar, your punctuation, your storytelling skills, and -- let's be honest -- your comedy.
No, let's not. Not like this, anyway.
4451189 People disliking a comment like that? Sheesh, I'm just trying to help.
That's fair, it's only a recommendation. Recommendations are guidelines, but not law. I mean, look at some of Stephen King's books. Some of them are three times the size of an average novel, and they tell a story just fine. Do what you want as long as it's something you can be proud of.
4451369 Well......that's your opinion. Some people don't like this style of humor. However if you don't like, be my guest.
4451582 Glad you understand!
nice love it more piz
LOVE IT MORE MORE
I am SO sorry to say this but....Let's remake MLP Season 1 Episode 1 and 2 has to go on hiatus. My work is being really busy. I don't know when I will have time to write again but as soon as I do I will start writing again. I love writing this series!
Sorry again. Hopefully my work will calm down soon.