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An interesting twist. So in DandD terms Celestia is more of a druid than a cleric. But, How are Twinken and Midnight biologically related. I mean why would he be in an orphanage if his parents are still alive on a private estate?
5764960 I'm gonna do a blog at some point that will reveal facts about the story that won't actually be in the story.
Though Midnight will explain why Twinken was in an orphanage, but not to him - He's gonna explain it to Twilight
that was certainly unexpected but still explain all the the loose ends well enough. Great job, I like stories that defy my expectations with a great twist on things.. Guess you menage to plan well your stories better then I had expected of you
Great job
and now for the fallout
Ho....ly....crap!
Ha! Knew it! Nicely done though. And covers his missing moon pony traits. Interesting way to wrap up his Epic Haunt Across History and explains the mixed reactions Hooded Pony had been giving Celestia and Shining.
great chapter I am so glad that midnight didn't die and now i'm very curious on what will transpire now will all secret to midnight broughht out into the light. great chapter and I look forward to the next one.
What?
Thanks for the very quick updates. Welcome back to the main story.
Woah!
I've been waiting for this update for a long time.
It was worth the wait.
. . . you made Pinke's brain hurt. Bravo my good man, bravo.
I also wonder did Celestia know that the soul she brought over who was human would then become Midnight. Or was that just coincidence. if she didn't know I bet her reaction to seeing him must have been very hard to hide given her other knowledge.
Wow! The way you explained it in this chapter was well worth the wait.
This is going to be awesome
MORE!!
time travel...it's a cornucopia of disturbing concepts.
Wow, just ... wow. You actually explained the whole time-travel thing really well. it's still crazy complicated and strange but it makes more sense now, great chapter, like I said before, I can't wait to see how these new ... revelations will effect Midnights relationship with his friends, especially Twilight and Twiken.
Wow... You did a great job!
People assume that time is a strict progression of cause to effect, but *actually* from a non-linear, non-subjective viewpoint - it's more like a big ball of wibbly wobbly... time-y wimey... stuff.
The only problem with this chapter is that it FEELS to me like Deus Ex Machina, even though looking at this chapter deeply makes me think that you really did have this planned out for a long while.
Uh. Screw trying to understand time and space physics now.
Twilight, are you a fool? Use your head; it'd screw up the timeline otherwise!
Wait a second... I've lost the track of time.
So, Midnight's time-slowing grenade goes haywire and sends him more than a thousand years back.
Then come his no doubt awesome adventures in the past, and then he dies at hooves of teenaged Celestia,
only to be reborn a year later, which, apparently, was just a couple decades ago.
And then he finally got his cutie mark and the destiny-changing spell triggered, returning all of his memories.
So... Um... How did Midnight survive for a whole thousand years, all of it without a cutie mark, and how come Celestia still was a teenager in the end?
8123818 you are a little bit off.
to know how it works you need to read TSR: A Midnight Stroll through Time
but else the one that kills Midnight is Teenage Sunset at the time Shining Armor is born.
I think i'ma agree with pinkie on this one....my head hurts....
...I’m still confused
Like, did the Midnight in the crash get reincarnated as the alicorn Midnight, or is this a different Midnight from a different universe where Midnight lived through his whole life instead of just waking up in Ponyville.
I’m still confused
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It's midnight who,through a magic accident, got sent back in time. He was dying so Celestia caused him to be reborn. He regained his memories. And became the hooded pony that was in previous chapters.
This one of the craziest plot twists I've seen in a while. And I've seen the seven deadly sins(anime) twist