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Nice job with hinting at future characters in this chapter. I'm glad they are all back on friendly terms. I wonder how long though. Also how will the tree react to the different warriors. Midnight may or may not be giving up Faith so would that supposively deactivate the other armor's if he gave it up? I guess we will see.
This was really good in terms of character development, as well as showing us just how badass Alicorn Midnight is.
Wow! your update rate is astounding. Are you a machine. When do you sleep or work or eat for that matter lol.
5779846 Well don't forget, Midnight's been through a HELL of a lot, and expected better of his friends, thinking they should know they don't have to call a good friend by a title he's not comfortable with
Not to mention, he's carried out a lot of cloak n' dagger stuff for Celestia during the years his existence was kept secret from the rest of Fquestria, and they had a negative effect on him, and the trauma he's suffered from watching his friend get killed, his mother cursed into a coma, his father disappearing and never coming back, and having to give up his little brother
Great chapter and I really enjoyed the emotions played out in this story but please don't make this story to dark I don't really enjoy the dark genre very much although I have to admit through what all Midnight went through it's no wonder he went through a drastic change but I hope the story doesn't become to dark as i enjoy having a light heart atmosphere around it. Great chapter and I look forward to the next one.
Nice Shrek reference I saw in there and the last line got me going.
The story is going actually going better than the original. I find that Midnight attitude of striking on his owe is interesting and understandable and raising what he has been doing for the past twelve years an before is as well. All-do I would have though he would have a more paternalistic and some what condescending attitude toward his friends, well he has a little...
I also wander if Celestia's disaperence a would make Midnight realizes that his grudge against her is stupid and start rethinking about how he sees he, or at list leave it in the past.
5779863 I do remember that. its just that it felt like his reaction came out of nowhere. one minute he's fine next minute he's pissed.
You really need to choose a better color for Blueblood's text as it is always invisible. Rarity's is not much bette but still visible at least.
5781185 It sez right on the story's description that the reader ought to set the background dark - I wanted the colored dialogues with light colors to be able to stand out
I see I spoke too soon. my apologies
I got the reference. It was Shrek