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I think you broke something here...
Should there be a space between DJ and Pon-3?
I couldn't find anything wrong with the last few chapters, not sure if there just wasn't anything or if it was because I wasn't paying much attention. Either way I'm really liking how you're doing the 'Best Night Ever' part of this story. Definitely a first that I've read, every other one either tries to subtly influence it and fails horribly or they just don't bother changing it and just follow the girls to watch what happens.
You'll figure it out. You're definitely a good enough storyteller to make it happen seamlessly.
Woo! Its time to R4V3!!!!!
I feel sorry for Octavia though. I mean, The Grand Galloping Gala is one of the most sought after events by the nobility and pretty much everyone in Equestria. She had to be darn good to even get to play it. Heck, she even let a random pony, Pinkie Pie, have some spotlight and played her song. I felt kind of sorry for her that the crowd didn't appreciate it. {And how Pinkie kind of threw her around, but I didn't hate Pinkie. She just got lost in the moment and I'm sure she apologized right afterwards. That and it was a really cute scene.}
Still, good story.