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Svengallop getting what’s coming to him is much more satisfying in this version.
Awesome chapter and songs
All my yes for gazelle and Try Everything
I liked the chapter overall. However, I nitpick music, so be prepared.
Firstly, Frank Sinatra has been dead for 21 years, considering he was huge in the 50’s, most of those musicians are dead now.
Secondly, I’m sorry, but no band should sound good with the Harmonic Twelve’s setup. 5 guitarists? Honestly, one could be on bass guitar, one could be on acoustic, one could be on rhythm, third rhythm, and lead, but still, 5 guitarists is overkill. You shouldn’t have more than 4 if you consider a bass a guitar. Also, Rarity plays the electric keyboard, which I’d presume would sound a little bit better. Not saying she can’t play piano, Vadim Pruzhanov does both, but I think an electric keyboard would sound better. I mean, I haven’t heard the original, so that might be part of it. Accordions shouldn’t sound good with guitars either.
But these are just nitpicks, I just rant about it sometimes. I liked the chapter.
On an aside, Scarlet Ash sounds like Joan Jett, was that what you were going for?
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"Set it all Free" was sung in the movie "Sing" by the character Ash, who was voiced by Scarlet Johansson , so I made a ponysona vaguely based on the two
And I think you're right about the band, but i wasn't really certain of how to make it up and just went with what seemed to match the characters
I am aware Frank Sinatra has been dead a long time, but his son, FS Jr., died not too long ago as well, so I felt I should go with the song's original singer
I think the ideas you have in this chapter are great but I also have to warn you that you might get pinged by the site admins.
There is a rule about using copyrighted lyrics in any stories posted here. I'm not sure what the workarounds is but you may have to remove the lyrics siandreplaced it was links to YouTube
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Oh... does it help if I change the lyrics a little?