After a malfunction with the MRI, Dan finds himself between life and death with two options. Return to Earth with little chance of survival, or to go to Equestria and start completely over. The choice he makes is obvious. Upon arrival though, he finds that he can't understand any of the ponies, and that he is slowly turning into one of them. Follow Dan on this epic adventure.
A deciphering key will be provided at the top of each chapter. And after each Dan POV chapter there will be a pony POV chapter with everything written in English (Except for Dan, the languages are basically swapped)
Chapters (5)
I noticed the the key is incomplet I dont see n through z
This actually looks promising. One thing, make the chapter longer or stick both a and b versions together to give an illusion of being bigger. If you can make 'em over 1.5k, great. Over 2k? Awesome.
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a-z
b-y
c-x
d-w
e-v
f-u
g-t
h-s
i-r
j-q
k-p
l-o
m-n
Is the exact same as
n-m
o-l
p-k
q-j
r-i
s-h
t-g
u-f
v-e
w-d
x-c
y-b
z-a
Only reversed, repeating it is unnecessary...
...so that's exactly what I decided to do for you :P
4386631 Sorry about that I am a little typsy tonight so I did not make that connection
Ya ok. Be like that. I can understand giving me a great story and making me want to read it, but giving me a BUCKING AWESOME story that caters to everything i love to read about? now thats unfair...
Cant wait to read this while at work tomorrow. Looks good! Lets hope you can keep updating! Cheers mate!
What do you think it is Fluttershy? A HiE.
4386602 Chapter 1c. is up, I hope you enjoy the length of this one and upcoming chapters :)
4386849 Glad you enjoyed it! I love hearing that I made somepony's day
Gs-gszmh blf
Th-thans you
k=p
h=s
typo maybe?
Story looks good so far.
I think you need to space out your lines, paragraph after paragraph is a bit much, break them apart to make it easier on the eyes
.This is Super Good
Those Downvoters are a Crap of shit.
This is for you Haters. : images5.fanpop.com/image/photos/30800000/haters-gonna-hate-my-little-pony-friendship-is-magic-30839618-500-288.jpg
4440045 I commend you on an exemplary insult my good sir, hopefully those three rapscallions have learnt their lesson.
Honestly, expressing their opinion? The outrage!
What do they think they are, people?
Twilight gettin a pettin and then a certain brother shows up and breaks some fingers comes to mind. Enjoying what I'm reading so far.
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Downvot your comment
"click"
Noooooo
Accidentally upvoting it
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Sorry,But am not following you.
Explain again,Please.
4440495 Apologies good sir.
¿Hablas español?
Procuraré hablar con fluidez y de manera concisa a ninguna interacción adicional que pueda ocurrir en una fecha posterior.
Me estaba burlando de el hecho de que redundantemente llamado tres individuos "Dados de las mierdas".
Esto es curioso, porque mientras se hace una mierda, es casi imposible para excretar que no sea una mierda, caca o cualquier otro derivitave de heces nada.
Digo "casi imposible" porque podría sangrar o gotear pus Fron el ano pero eso estaría agarrando a un clavo ardiendo.
Mi punto es, vive y deja vivir. Cálmate y no insultar a la gente de poca o ninguna razón!
Todo el mundo tiene derecho a su propia opinión.
Además, ¡jaja! Usted acaba de tomar el tiempo para traducir y leer esto!
4440700 Curious, when this is translated back into english; it's almost as badly structured as his comment...
4440718 Sorry, english is my second language
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I Didn't ask for a Whole Shitty List of a Weird language.
En Nog dergelijks mijn bericht is niet slecht.ik geef gewoon mijn mening uit.Wat is er mis met mening uiten ? Niks.Dus ja,Het heeft geen zin om te dissen.
And i will ask to stop this conversation.Thank you very much.
4440766 Please capitalise your i's, put spaces after your full stops and sure, I'll stop talking to you now.
I do like your profile picture though...
Bye!
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BYE !
When they put me down I screamed out again before blacking out.
This guy is weak, blacking out after a disslocation... >.> Please...
lol...
Now I read on!
This is exciting!
Loving this story thus far, The translation is a bit hard to translate, Perhaps you could keep with the odd language but put the translation in (Quotes) or something?
Either way this is a very fun story!
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also author: R xzm urtfiv lfg dsvg ozmtfztv rg rh.(I can figure out whet languange it is.)typo in the code
Just like the author, this fix will never return