HOLY........................................SHIT........................................ AMMMMMMAAAAAZZZZZZIIIINNNGGGGG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Kudos to both you and Dragonpony. This ride just got 50% more awestastic-extreme-mazing!!!!!!!!!
I'm willing to admit that I was a bit lost at the beginning but it looks like Twilight, after having heartbroken by a douche, is making a move on Spike. Rarity won't take this well. And it looks like Spike has some feelings for Twilight as well, and it's nice for him to politely told that mare to fuck off.
And PinPrick....It's a special type of Darwin Award that's given to someone who does this. You've hurt a girl, the public knowledge of which would have you facing a pissed off A. dragon, B. Sun Goddess, C. Pegasus Mare who can rain-nuke a building, D. Pegasus Mare who commands a legion of carniverous animals (Including a large bear), E. Earth Mare who can appear from behind you, anywhere, with a knife, F. Earth mare who can break every bone in your body with one leg, G. Big Brother who is a decorated soldier. That means you're bucked seven ways to Sunday
4442432 don't forget a princess of love who could probably rot your heart to a core, or even a moon princess who is probably itching to send someone to the moon.
Ok, ok, ok... WHAT THE F**K JUST HAPPENED?! Why all of a sudden this? What happened exactly, why flashbacks, I, ugh, why just jump right into this? This was completely rushed...
4442432 You forgot about a unicorn mare that has connections to half of the Canterlot elite and can him blacklisted, if she just doesn't proceed to use those marital arts skill she has and doesn't talk about to, at the very least, put him in traction.
As for the story, I was praying that Twilight wouldn't be his first or that it wasn't the first clop that we see. Please don't let my prayers go unanswered.
I think it's safe to say that you can add Rarity to the list as well, thought it is basically a roundabout way of realizing that she has feelings for the drake.
4443179 I understand. It's just that in every harem fic I have read, save two, Spike's first has been either Twilight or Rarity. I don't mind Spilight or Sparity, but they are usually the most common one I see. That's all. However, it is your choice and I am still going to read this story, as long as the quality still good. I also want to find out who are all the mares that end up in his herd (as well as the 'experiences' he has along the way.)
Twilight, I'm pretty sure that you of all mares would know that this would be a long time coming.....But I also believe that "fortune favors the brave". It was brave of you to actually agree to a date of your own volition!! And fortune smiles because despite the horror of a double, Spike comes to the rescue to rescue Twilight from her broken heart, and at the same time it shows that there are deep feelings between the two "siblings" and they seem to finally acknowlege each other in a possible marefriend/drakefriend sort of way.....
Stay tuned!!!
Sucks that the guy that asked you out turns out to be a mule..... That bastard---Pinprick, is it? How appropriately named....----that would be nominee #1 for the annual Darwin award. Seriously, the guy may have signed his own death warrant with how he acted.....Sometimes there are reasons why certain ponies are still single. And if you are too dumb to kinda see some of the signs, then I am sorry for you. It runs both ways, so this is also on you, Twi. As intelligent as you are, you are a dunce when it comes to social culture. Again it's a good thing Spike saved you from that fiasco.....
I've always disliked when stories do random time skips. You only skipped a few days though so I'll let it slide. It's mostly just a pet peeve of mine anyway
Although there is one minor thing that REALLY bugs me with your story! SOMETHING THAT JUST DANG DIDDLY DANG GRINDS MY GEARS.
...most of your ellipses only have two periods! It's supposed to be three!
Two things wrong in my opinion: One, the time skip isn't bad but it is a bit jarring, try to make it flow a bit better. Two:
Linked Hearts, though, was rather clingy. She seemed intent on always being being him and her. He had made a note to let her know she had no reason to act like that./quote] You repeated being in this sentence.
4443257 Look at some of DarkPhantom's stuff. His heat week is just a harem of him, pinkie and flutters. Fairly well written and he portrays the characters well
4442432 that list I don't think has an end remember She is as good as family to the apples so that is ALOT of earth ponies alone. So to make a long story short, there is no place in Equestria that is safe. He will be found and he will be taught a lesson. One that may be potentially deadly
Good to see that Spike is smart enough to realize that there are some mares who just want to bang him, and that he deals with it very maturely. This next chapter is gonna be awkward.
5935128 Only a few walls? I was thinking maybe a nation or two. Both him, and his needle dick. 4442432 Amen to that last part. Can almost feel sorry for the bastard, and how badly his face is going to be smashed. 4442491 Amen to those as well. 4442590 And cant forget about that one. Also, since he pissed off not only Spike, but Shining Armour, AND Cadence, there is also not just Equestria, but the Crystal empire. He is FUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUCCCCCKKKKEDDDDDDD.
EDIT: And you forgot another, the Princess of Love. And I have a feeling that Pinprick will not survive with her. When you mess with Twilight, you mess with Cadance.
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8782676 I know I'm late but bare in mind that they're not blood related... So in this case maybe just maybe, the incest here is actually wincest.
Now if they were blood related then I'd draw a line there but they aren't. I mean if I had two children (1 boy 1 girl) both around the same age one of my blood but the other adopted, I would be fine with it if they got together when they were older. They're both of different parents so there'd be no inbreeding and still be of diverse blood. Like I said if you are blood related it's a no go, but if you are not fair game you both like each other and there would still be new blood joining your family.
Spilight incoming
HOLY........................................SHIT........................................
AMMMMMMAAAAAZZZZZZIIIINNNGGGGG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Kudos to both you and Dragonpony. This ride just got 50% more awestastic-extreme-mazing!!!!!!!!!
I'm willing to admit that I was a bit lost at the beginning but it looks like Twilight, after having heartbroken by a douche, is making a move on Spike. Rarity won't take this well. And it looks like Spike has some feelings for Twilight as well, and it's nice for him to politely told that mare to fuck off.
Yay, Tough Break!
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And PinPrick....It's a special type of Darwin Award that's given to someone who does this. You've hurt a girl, the public knowledge of which would have you facing a pissed off A. dragon, B. Sun Goddess, C. Pegasus Mare who can rain-nuke a building, D. Pegasus Mare who commands a legion of carniverous animals (Including a large bear), E. Earth Mare who can appear from behind you, anywhere, with a knife, F. Earth mare who can break every bone in your body with one leg, G. Big Brother who is a decorated soldier. That means you're bucked seven ways to Sunday
4442432 Or as I like to call it: He's a special kind of stupid.
4442432 don't forget a princess of love who could probably rot your heart to a core, or even a moon princess who is probably itching to send someone to the moon.
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Don't forget H: The rest of the goddamn country who sees her as a national hero.
Ok, ok, ok... WHAT THE F**K JUST HAPPENED?!
Why all of a sudden this?
What happened exactly, why flashbacks, I, ugh, why just jump right into this?
This was completely rushed...
Twilight finally accept's her feeling's. How will Spike react?
awsome but i feel this ch was out of left field a tad since we still never found out what happend with Rares
Also how many of the other EOH besides Twi, pinks and flutters going after Spike
4442432 You forgot about a unicorn mare that has connections to half of the Canterlot elite and can him blacklisted, if she just doesn't proceed to use those marital arts skill she has and doesn't talk about to, at the very least, put him in traction.
4442743 Yeah. We never did find out about what happened with Rarity once she woke up.
As for the story, I was praying that Twilight wouldn't be his first or that it wasn't the first clop that we see. Please don't let my prayers go unanswered.
4442825 if she woke up
4442432 or big daddy D, the King of crazy Discord!!!!
Soooooo is Pinprick gonna get punched? 'Cause I really wanna see him get punched
4442834 I know it's not exactly your cup of tea, but not having her as his first just feels...well, kinda off to me.
4442745
I think it's safe to say that you can add Rarity to the list as well, thought it is basically a roundabout way of realizing that she has feelings for the drake.
YEEEEEEEEEEEEESSSSSS! My favourite shipping
4443179 I understand. It's just that in every harem fic I have read, save two, Spike's first has been either Twilight or Rarity. I don't mind Spilight or Sparity, but they are usually the most common one I see. That's all. However, it is your choice and I am still going to read this story, as long as the quality still good. I also want to find out who are all the mares that end up in his herd (as well as the 'experiences' he has along the way.)
Well, well, well.....
Twilight, I'm pretty sure that you of all mares would know that this would be a long time coming.....But I also believe that "fortune favors the brave". It was brave of you to actually agree to a date of your own volition!! And fortune smiles because despite the horror of a double, Spike comes to the rescue to rescue Twilight from her broken heart, and at the same time it shows that there are deep feelings between the two "siblings" and they seem to finally acknowlege each other in a possible marefriend/drakefriend sort of way.....
Stay tuned!!!
Sucks that the guy that asked you out turns out to be a mule..... That bastard---Pinprick, is it? How appropriately named....----that would be nominee #1 for the annual Darwin award. Seriously, the guy may have signed his own death warrant with how he acted.....Sometimes there are reasons why certain ponies are still single. And if you are too dumb to kinda see some of the signs, then I am sorry for you. It runs both ways, so this is also on you, Twi. As intelligent as you are, you are a dunce when it comes to social culture. Again it's a good thing Spike saved you from that fiasco.....
Pinprick, you watch the fuck out. Spikes the wresteler, youre the door. oh who am i kidding HE WILL GET IT.
4442894 do you really want to just see him get punched, I wanna see him crucified by the legion from fallout.
4444004 Sometimes a solid right hook is all you need baby.
WOOHOO! SPLIGHT!
Pinprick best start running, otherwise Spike will be eating pony for the first time (good way to hide the body too )
Hope PinPrick get wants he desires.
I gotta say man, with each chapter I like this more. thanks for making it.
I've always disliked when stories do random time skips.
You only skipped a few days though so I'll let it slide. It's mostly just a pet peeve of mine anyway
Although there is one minor thing that REALLY bugs me with your story! SOMETHING THAT JUST DANG DIDDLY DANG GRINDS MY GEARS.
...most of your ellipses only have two periods! It's supposed to be three!
4449189 I just like to sit back and watch the world burn..hehe
Two things wrong in my opinion: One, the time skip isn't bad but it is a bit jarring, try to make it flow a bit better. Two:
4443257 Look at some of DarkPhantom's stuff. His heat week is just a harem of him, pinkie and flutters. Fairly well written and he portrays the characters well
4443461
Brilliant video....simple hinting is the best kind!
Sweet Crispy Budha? Well then... That's fucking hilarious.
4442432 that list I don't think has an end remember She is as good as family to the apples so that is ALOT of earth ponies alone. So to make a long story short, there is no place in Equestria that is safe. He will be found and he will be taught a lesson. One that may be potentially deadly
Good to see that Spike is smart enough to realize that there are some mares who just want to bang him, and that he deals with it very maturely.
This next chapter is gonna be awkward.
Pinprick you bastard. I hope Spike puts that prat through several walls.
Pinprick... Pin-prick... Needledick? Pretty clever insulting name.
5935128
Only a few walls? I was thinking maybe a nation or two. Both him, and his needle dick.
4442432
Amen to that last part. Can almost feel sorry for the bastard, and how badly his face is going to be smashed.
4442491
Amen to those as well.
4442590
And cant forget about that one. Also, since he pissed off not only Spike, but Shining Armour, AND Cadence, there is also not just Equestria, but the Crystal empire. He is FUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUCCCCCKKKKEDDDDDDD.
hell yah he is4442432
Can we just talk about pinpricks name for a second. I mean really pinprick. His parents must have hated him to give him that name. I mean really.
BOI why can't it just say sleep. why it gotta be touch
4442432 True words my friend, true words^^
EDIT: And you forgot another, the Princess of Love. And I have a feeling that Pinprick will not survive with her. When you mess with Twilight, you mess with Cadance.
8782676
I know I'm late but bare in mind that they're not blood related... So in this case maybe just maybe, the incest here is actually wincest.
Now if they were blood related then I'd draw a line there but they aren't. I mean if I had two children (1 boy 1 girl) both around the same age one of my blood but the other adopted, I would be fine with it if they got together when they were older. They're both of different parents so there'd be no inbreeding and still be of diverse blood. Like I said if you are blood related it's a no go, but if you are not fair game you both like each other and there would still be new blood joining your family.