Giving up on Rarity causes Spike's life to get a tad more interesting.
AGAIN
"Writer! Senses! TINGLING!" Velvet almost bellowed, a wide grin on her face.
......I wonder where she's feeling that tingling...
5613269 You mean like Twilight 'The Dragon Layer' Sparkle
or Spike seeing the new statue?
They're not THAT big, guys! Sheesh!
So, when do we get an actual chapter? This is all well and good but when is the next chapter.
I'm loving every chapter of this! Now to look at the site every night to watch for the new chapter...again.
OH YEAH!
Oh...god.
Oh. My. Goodness.... Now, all we need is for DeadPool to come in, dressed in drag and doing the Hula.
5613289 Bow chicka bow wow
Why no Gilda? Griffons are natural hunters
5615107 Huh? What are you talking about?
5615162
Just a minor note...
First, a minor correction: Sweetie Belle, as in "belle of the ball" or "Belle" from Disney's Beauty and the Beast; not a bell that is rung.
Second, I applaud the correct Apple Bloom (two words); so many other fan-fiction writers use the incorrect "Applebloom" (one word).
YUSSSS! Glad to see you're back. Funny shot chapter
5618694 'fraid no wings in this one
I haven't even started reading this story yet but every time I read the title it makes me laugh so much.
~The Rift Walker
Six months? Is this a look into the future or something? What have they been doing for half a year?
5618718 That's a shame. It would make him an even bigger chick magnet, especially to the pegasi.
5625684 No, it's just something humorous me and DragonPony thought up.
5625778 Steven...that is hilarious.
hehe, no matter how many times I read this chapter I can never read it and not laugh at twilight's response to her mother and her mother's reaction......Gotta love dirty minded mothers that can crank out a best selling book
Yep! Still laughing!
I love this Twilight Velvet.
8990889Makes me think of female Jiraiya.
AGAIN
......I wonder where she's feeling that tingling...
5613269 You mean like Twilight 'The Dragon Layer' Sparkle
or Spike seeing the new statue?
They're not THAT big, guys! Sheesh!
So, when do we get an actual chapter? This is all well and good but when is the next chapter.
I'm loving every chapter of this! Now to look at the site every night to watch for the new chapter...again.
OH YEAH!
Oh...god.
Oh. My. Goodness.... Now, all we need is for DeadPool to come in, dressed in drag and doing the Hula.
5613289 Bow chicka bow wow
Why no Gilda? Griffons are natural hunters
5615107 Huh? What are you talking about?
5615162
Just a minor note...
First, a minor correction: Sweetie Belle, as in "belle of the ball" or "Belle" from Disney's Beauty and the Beast; not a bell that is rung.
Second, I applaud the correct Apple Bloom (two words); so many other fan-fiction writers use the incorrect "Applebloom" (one word).
YUSSSS! Glad to see you're back. Funny shot chapter
5618694 'fraid no wings in this one
I haven't even started reading this story yet but every time I read the title it makes me laugh so much.
~The Rift Walker
Six months? Is this a look into the future or something? What have they been doing for half a year?
5618718 That's a shame. It would make him an even bigger chick magnet, especially to the pegasi.
5625684 No, it's just something humorous me and DragonPony thought up.
5625778 Steven...that is hilarious.
hehe, no matter how many times I read this chapter I can never read it and not laugh at twilight's response to her mother and her mother's reaction......Gotta love dirty minded mothers that can crank out a best selling book
Yep! Still laughing!
I love this Twilight Velvet.
8990889
Makes me think of female Jiraiya.