You mean huntresses.
Also how is Rarity taking the Spike-free zone?

4387028 Just noticed that and corrected it.

For Rarity, she hasn't found out yet. but she will.

Well I would hate to be Rarity right about now...........

4387028 better then twi would ohhhhhhhhhh

Twilight is going to go ape shit on Rarity! Lock your doors because shit is about to get real!

Really Rarity? I know you probably friend zoned the guy but if that isn't a kick in the balls I don't know what is. Though Twi is taking it a lot worse. Let me guess, every single within age range(and few that aren't) mare has their eyes on Spike but since was after Rarity didn't make a move. Now that he's stopped chasing after her it's basically open season.

4387346 Well, she still is a little annoyed about what Rarity did, even though it was mostly a lapse in judgement:

4387397 While I would probably make a joke here Twilight has a long history of overreacting.

4387346 I agree with you that would make the sorry more interesting. But I would like it if Spike didn't do what I have seen so many other characters do in this situation and run from them all. I want him to embrace it. He has 7 years to make up for lost time. I want to see a chapter or two with different dates with different mares. (You can even make a contest out of it. Let your fans vote and who we pick gets to have a second date) I would like to see him take Twi out, sound like she needs a night out as well. I just want to see Spike enjoy his new freedom and not do the ecchi anime guy thing where they act scared when a girl make a advance at him. Dude 7 years to make up for! lol.

4387522 I can see her overreacting when she goes and confront Rarity. I mean right now she isn't in the most sound state of mind. She is starting to get the hots for someone she 'almost' saw as a brother not until this morning. And now she finds out the mare that almost made him give up on love want to put another nail through his heart. I can see her losing it slightly her without her thinking about it.

4387555 I have to agree with you for the most part. The only exception is when all of them form a mob and chase after him, then thats a good time to run.

4387660 True but that is when you run outside and you then come out giving all the mares a speech saying he is happy they all show interest and if they are willing he would love to take all of them out on a date one at a time to get to know them better and see where it can do. But he want to weight all his options so he wont be making any relationship decisions anytime time soon. I hope you call can understand I really would like to spend time with each and every one of you. What do you think? Does Spike have the silver tongue to pull something like that off lol.

4387688 Does Spike have the skills to talk his way to an nice solution? Yes

Will the mares get their horniness under control to listen to him? Beats me.

4387708 ... I like his odd ether way

Spike is free from Rarity, but I got the feeling that Rarity like many other mares know that Spike was I love with Rarity, but in her cases she didn't know she was the mare he was in love in and because of that she didn't do anything.

You know why I like this fic. It dates back to the old times of spike shippings. When Spike technically gets rejected by rarity and the second everyone hears they go to great lenghts to become his new rarity. The reason why rarity is my least favorite is because how bitchy she is to spike. In other words this is awsome keep.it.going.

there's a reason why pissing off someone who is basically a mega wizard isn't on my to-do list. hopefully, for Rarity's sake, Twilight doesn't decide to just blow her up

Spike...run.
Rarity...kiss your flank goodbye.

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4388845 *snicker*

Well, played, good sir, well played

Twilight is pissed. I almost feel sorry for Rarity almost.

welp! it was nice knowing you Rares

also Spike the King of Swag, is finally unleashed!

I don't have pretty much anything to say to this, except:

--It's awesome that Spike has some guy friends, especially Big Macintosh. I like hearing him as a Big Brother to Spike.
--Thanks to Applebloom (or unthankfully, depends on your temperament) , now there's gonna be fillies as well as mares that are just come to age that want to have their piece of the drake.
--Pinkie should have seem or heard the rage of death once she let it on that Rarity is preparing for a date....seriously, that should have place her doozy sensors crazy.....

Other than that, let the chaos commence!!

4387346

Hit the nail on the head, boss.

Mares and filles, start your heat engines!!!

I expect the mother of all beatdowns to occur next.

Aw yeah finally a cat fight, very well written for a first fic, i hope i can make one just as well. So on a scale in pop how many mares, are gonna be chasin Spike here, or half the town ( no idea the pop), hopefully not the princesses ,lord knows we have enough molestia.

4390522 still crunching numbers on that.

Aw, not even Luna?

This is a good story, I would like to see the rest of it.

I smell a dragon-hunt coming on, and it looks like Applebloom is already in the lead!

And she never works alone. Love this!

I can just see eather flash, shining, or Big Mac yelling lucky bugger at spike

There are two beings in the town that need to start running for completely different yet life preserving reasons.

4391940

how about the join forces???

......oh, wait....

4390531
Actually, Luna rarely gets any. Ah fuck it LUNA SEX FOR ALL! ( actually only spike, and maybe pipsqueak when he is older , or now idc either way someone is getting screwed.) Oh and any tips on writing your first fic?

4392165 well, only thing I can really say is think up a premise that you like and go from there, that and be ready to rewrite your first chapter a time or two.

4392178
Thanks and how much child support is spike gonna have to pay? :3

And Celestia knows I haven't had a date since...since..well, never.

Lel.

I have a feeling Rarity isn't as cold hearted as we've been led to believe, but we'll definitely see next chapter!

Sooooooo chapter 4 when?

As interesting as I find this story, I have to say that Rarity's characterization here is getting to the point of being ridiculous.

Wait a minute... I thought the opposite happened: when a male is single, the girls ignore him, and when he's taken, l the girls are all over him... something to do with women always wanting things that aren't theirs... I guess things are different in equestria- especially since there are 4 times as many mares as stallions.

4552598 Stereotypically, and sometimes realistically, that is indeed the case, but apparently, both Rarity and Spike are of high calibur and are very desirable, meaning going after Spike is fruitless since he is pining heavily after the most attractive female in a town full of attractive females.

4503943 Well in fairness to the author, there are two separate occasions in the shop where Rarity goes out of her way to impress a specific stallion for a relationship. In Blue blood and in trenderhoof we see the exact same thing. Rarity going all googly eyed over some stallion and forgetting about everything else around, pony or otherwise. Then in Season 2 we saw her obsessive qualities again in the Twilight's birthday episode, where Rarity lies to make herself seem like a Canterlot mare and hides her ponyville roots from all the high society ponies

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"Nice form, but I've seen better." The pink party pony commented, holding up a sigh with a 7.9 on it.

Some typos are just hilarious. I'm fairly sure you meant 'sign' but with Pinkie Pie i can accept either or.

"Not yet. But Rarity said she wanted him to come over to help get a dress ready for...a ..a date. she..has.to..tonight...." Pinkie trailed off. Thankfully, she was pretty sure the look on Twilight's face wasn't intended for her.

My rage rocket has Rarity trapped in it and its flying towards Kerbol (the sun)

Ya know, this is the third time for me to reread this story, and i just went back over the line where Pinkie states where foals come from
Pinkie's parents are into some interesting bedroom funtimes.

"Well, when a stallion and mare love each other very much, they partake in actions that normally can't be repeated on a children's television show, sometimes involving ice cream toppings and handcuffs."

and rope.
and blackjack.
and hot wax.
and whips. and chains. And cake. And latex. And gags.

One of those was a lie, can you guess which one?

Don't shoot the messenger Twilight. It's bad etiquette.

"Well, when a stallion and mare love each other very much, they partake in actions that normally can't be repeated on a children's television show, sometimes involving ice cream toppings and handcuffs."

Best line evah.

they partake in actions that normally can't be repeated on a children's television show, sometimes involving ice cream toppings and handcuffs

I like the sound of that~