Oh my God, dude. That damn music and the fact that those Crystal Kingdom-ruling ass-hats were just watching Spike get chased like a piece of rotisserie gold at Fat Camp made my day!
Poor Sweetie Belle. Her sister just got to the point of where she was able to work again, and Twilight dropped the bombshell. Sweetie thought she had to walk on eggshells before? I'm still waiting for some pony to tell Rarity how she lost Spike. We all know she is not going to figure it out on her own.
Well, Cadence and Shining Armor are family to Spike as well, so this is kinda bit old-hat at this point. They knew that something like this would happen once Spike set foot in Crystal soil. Plus, remember Cadance and Shining were already waiting for Spike, so there would be a little bit of fun before the officlal "How are you doing".
If Shining knows what's good for him (and able to have sex with his sexy wife as much as he wants) he will jump in and help his future brother-in-law from tearing him limb to limb. After all, either way he has to answer to a princess that is family to him----he's screwed either way
Looks like he's starting to run out of steam and I sincerely doubt Twilight would appreciate us letting her boyfriend get passed around like a copy of Playmare in prison.
That last line.... Oh god I about died of laughter.
Welp, guess this means I should revive my Spike story. Great chapter by the way! Looking forward to the rest of Rarity's reactions and Pinkie Pie being Pinkie Pie
I always thought it was my natural charm and great pick up lines.
LMFAO... Shining you silly fool. It also wouldn't surprise me if Spike really did set those two up for realzies. Spike should change his name to 'hitch'.
awesome just awesome. when the chase scene started my brain automatically started ringing the Yakety Sax running music, and when i saw that the video was actually there i just broke up into hysterical laughter well done have a mustache
AND CELESTIA'S COTTON SOCKS, YAKKITY SAX AND THE CHASE IS PURE BUCKING PLATINUM.
Awesome fic. It may be dated but it's classic and I'm not huge on clop that is straight raunchy pony porn, this has good substance, well thought out, so far the characters seem pretty true to personality or at least are believable.
5773978 Can't wait until she apologizes for being a jerk to spike. Everyone could see how he felt but she refused to give him the chance to be anything but her loving slave.
This chapter was funny was hell.
Well I laughed my ass off, now I gotta get a new one XD
Oh my God, dude. That damn music and the fact that those Crystal Kingdom-ruling ass-hats were just watching Spike get chased like a piece of rotisserie gold at Fat Camp made my day!
Poor Sweetie Belle. Her sister just got to the point of where she was able to work again, and Twilight dropped the bombshell. Sweetie thought she had to walk on eggshells before? I'm still waiting for some pony to tell Rarity how she lost Spike. We all know she is not going to figure it out on her own.
5773978 Actually more like exasperation than eggshells, hehe.
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Well, Cadence and Shining Armor are family to Spike as well, so this is kinda bit old-hat at this point. They knew that something like this would happen once Spike set foot in Crystal soil. Plus, remember Cadance and Shining were already waiting for Spike, so there would be a little bit of fun before the officlal "How are you doing".
If Shining knows what's good for him (and able to have sex with his sexy wife as much as he wants) he will jump in and help his future brother-in-law from tearing him limb to limb. After all, either way he has to answer to a princess that is family to him----he's screwed either way
Cadence is comparing Spike to some Playmare?!?
5774126 no, she's calling him a 'copy of Playmare'. lol
That last line.... Oh god I about died of laughter.
"...and a couple of stallions. "
Now, you just writte one clopping version, bro.
5774629 No worries, heh. That was just for humor.
Tortoise!!!!!!!!
Welp, guess this means I should revive my Spike story. Great chapter by the way! Looking forward to the rest of Rarity's reactions and Pinkie Pie being Pinkie Pie
I love it how Cadence and Shining just sit back and watch Spike get chased around for a while.
LMFAO... Shining you silly fool. It also wouldn't surprise me if Spike really did set those two up for realzies. Spike should change his name to 'hitch'.
Run forest, RUN!
5773632 Second that. Especially at the end!
I think i died a few times back there. Might've even exploded twice. That was genius and hilarious.
Most excellent.
5792010 No clue what that is.
5792010 Depends on which twelve we're talking about.
And seeing how Twi said something about Kirin just after she cast her sperm-B-gone spell, I'm surprised my comment is what got the question, lol
5791834 Thanks mate it means alot to Read those kind words
awesome just awesome. when the chase scene started my brain automatically started ringing the Yakety Sax running music, and when i saw that the video was actually there i just broke up into hysterical laughter well done have a mustache
"Look!" He yelled, pointing behind them, "It's forty-two scintillating blue distractions!" The moment they all turned, he took off running full-tilt.
love this tactic.
THE SONG!!! XD
If only you added a scene with spike running in and out of.a bunch of random doors
Oh my bucking cotton socks on Celestia's left hoof, Yakkity Sax and the chase had me howling!
I don't care how old this fix is, it's an instant classic and forever faved
And a good Cloppy romance comedy is so nice to see rather than just straight up pony porn.
Bravo.
Cheesus Bucking Rice!
Passed around like a Playmare in prison!?
Solid Bucking Gold my friend!
AND CELESTIA'S COTTON SOCKS, YAKKITY SAX AND THE CHASE IS PURE BUCKING PLATINUM.
Awesome fic. It may be dated but it's classic and I'm not huge on clop that is straight raunchy pony porn, this has good substance, well thought out, so far the characters seem pretty true to personality or at least are believable.
Good show old been. Bravo.
I dropped lauphing the song and the words made me just fucken loose it good chapter.
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Can't wait until she apologizes for being a jerk to spike. Everyone could see how he felt but she refused to give him the chance to be anything but her loving slave.