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Ponies throughout all of Equestria have shown some resistance against Luna's return to her throne. She doesn't seem to blame them, and has lately been growing depressed. Some of the radical groups in the society have publicly protested, some rioted, and some may go that extra step further...

Comments may contain spoilers. You've been warned.

A huge thanks to Scipio Austra for the image (I don't think he's on this site, but I am open to corrections).

Chapters (14)
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Comments ( 16 )

Does the title imply that the story has already taken place?

Depending on how far you've read in (SPOILERS FROM HERE ON!), you'll see that some parts of the story reference the things which Luna did in the past, either as NMM or herself. The prologue is a good example, a bit of CH6 is, and there are a few others scattered throughout.

I hope this story is still on.

I am really sorry: I've had writers' block for a number of weeks now and I'm not sure I'm going to pull through. I've written 2.7k words of CH14, but I just can't finish it. Along with the fact that I got a review from ponychan, so I need to virtually rewrite the first five chapters and drop the prologue.

So to be honest, don't get your hopes up that this story will be updated anytime in the next month, and maybe even after.

36408 I just wanted to say that i think your story is awesome. I hope you still finish it for us who are reading it here.

I also hope you eventually finish this story since I enjoy it immensely :heart::twilightsmile:

Hmm this seems to my interest around 50k Words long, Luna is in it and she seems to have a major play in this also it helps that this appeared in my TwiLuna Group.

Cancelled:rainbowhuh: :raritydespair::raritycry: why cancelled?

will read anyway.

well twas a good read while it lasted:twilightsmile:.

Such a shame, I would have loved to see this finished

One of the better Fight Scenes of the Royal Sisters.
also Celestia PoV is quite awesome. :trollestia:

Radicals huh.

I am not sure, one Point I love the Luna PoV even more also the slightly more mature feel of the Story.
On the other side you have established Luna being the (""second"":trollestia:) most Powerful being in Existence and then have her clobbered by some mortals :rainbowhuh: well solid Battle Scene at least onward to Ponyvile.

Such a shame that was a really well done first Person Luna Story.

I've passed on all responsibility of this story to Frostwyrm. He's free to do whatever he wants with it including finishing it; however, I know that he's busy with exams and writing his own stories, so there is not much chance of it being done.

Thank you all, so so much for reading this. It warms me to know I'm appreciated.

Now, have some big hugs while I think about what to do next. I don't know if I'll write another fanfic, or move onto standalone novels (someday, I delude myself), but until then, love you all :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

Yes!! Hell yes!!
Alright, lulu x twily forever! :pinkiehappy:

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