Unexpected

by SureFreeD

Chapter 1

Unexpected
Twilight had called over Rainbow Dash to help her out with the cleaning of the library.

It was minutes before Rainbow Dash crashed through the door, knocking a table over.

“Rainbow Dash, you need to be more careful, you could hurt yourself!”

Twilight worried as she saw the tumbled over Pegasus.

Rainbow Dash stood up on her hooves, looking over the fallen books.

“Oops, sorry about that”

She picked them up one by one with her mouth, and then popped a question.

“Hey Twi…”

She was interrupted by Twilight passing through her, she smelled like freshly picked roses.

She sniffed Twilight’s mane.

“Oh wow, you smell really good, did you use perfume?”

Twilight glanced back, raising her front hoof a little.

“Yes, I do use it sometimes”

Scootaloo entered the library, immediately looking over to Rainbow Dash.

“Hey umm, Rainbow Dash you promised me you’d show me a few flying tricks?”

She spoke in a soft, quiet voice, and then scratched her hoof.

“Oh, I’m so sorry, I’m helping out Twilight with the cleaning, maybe I can do it later!”

Rainbow Dash gently kissed Scootaloo’s forehead.

Scootaloo blushed, her cheeks red, she smiled at Rainbow Dash.

“Oh, umm, okay then well, see ‘ya… I guess.”

She walked out of the library looking back at Rainbow Dash.

“Aw, that was nice; you sure know how to handle a filly”

“Yeah well, I love those little things, so cute”

She faintly smiled, as Rainbow Dash turned around she saw Twilight facing her, looking at her in a weird way, her eyes half closed, and a smirk on her left side.

“Agh…”

Rainbow Dash squeaked as Twilight pushed her to the floor.

Twilight was on top, sitting on Rainbow Dash’s lap.

She went closer to her face, already feeling her breathing, heartbeat.

They both blushed, their faces bright red, and the sense of hot atmosphere around them.

They gazed upon each other’s eyes; Twilight slid her jaw open, sticking out her tongue.

“W...What are you doing?”

Rainbow Dash asked as looking upon the purple pony, her expression turned around as Twilight, licked her neck going all the way up to her chin.

“Ah, and you taste so nice.”

Twilight spoke, as was saliva dripped from her tongue and unto Dash’s chest.

“T…Twilight please stop this is uncomfortable”

Twilight grabbed Dash’s flanks lifting her up.

“Whooaa”

Pressing her against the wall

“Oof”

Twilight began rubbing Dash’s flanks, she dropped her jaw, panting.

“Twi… *pant* Twi… *pant* you… *pant* you know… *pant* I’m very… *pant* sensitive there.

Rainbow Dash was now sweating, her flanks were burning.

Twilight began rubbing them faster and faster.

‘Oh… OH… OH YEAH”

Rainbow Dash screamed out as she was being pleasured.

Her tongue stuck out, dripping with saliva, Dash and Twilight’s lips made connection.

She slid her tongue into Dash’s mouth; they began making circular movements inside.

As they finished the procedure, their lips disconnected, still a line of saliva between their mouths.

Twilight swallowed Dash’s spit, and then put on a seductive smile.

Dash did the same, still looking at each other’s eyes.

“Oh you’re a silly filly aren’t you?”

Rainbow Dash tightly squeezed Twilight around her tender slim body.

Twilight romantically bit Dash’s ear, Dash licked her cheek.

They both moaned from the pleasure they just had, Twilight let go of Dash’s flanks.

Still their hearts beating, their blood warm rushing through the veins, still locked in place, couldn’t take eyes of each other.

“I love you”

Twilight spoke as they both hugged each other.

After a few seconds, they resumed their cleaning, after a couple of minutes which seemed like hours, they were finally
done, the books in order, the library was sparkling.

As Rainbow Dash walked out of the door she was stopped by Twilight.

“I hope I see you again soon Dashie dear.”

She kissed her on the cheek on went inside.

Comments

[SureFreeD]

I kinda messed it up with the spacing... :\

[Trill]

Remember kids = rape is fine if you drug your saliva.

[Fox-Sama]

Did Twilight rape Dash??

[SureFreeD]

20450 By the looks of it, yes...

[Fox-Sama]

I don't know if I should laugh or cry...

[SureFreeD]

20532 Maybe both, 'lol'

[Fox-Sama]

20565

Ok then both it is. but I am not have Anypony get raped in my story. LOL

[SureFreeD]

20594 I can lol at that

Rainbow Rape lol

[Fish Taco Truck]

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[Cunt_Crusader]

Should I be crying as I just read Rainbow Dash get raped by her best friend? Or should I be laughing my ass off because Rainbow Dash just got raped by her best friend?

[Fullmetal brony]

gross

[SureFreeD]

Oh come on, it wasn't exactly rape.
After all Rainbow Dash DID enjoy it!

[john-117]

Luna approves. Though some development would be much appreciated.

36106
That's the spirit, as long as you are good at it it does not count as rape.

Uhh...

[TwiSpark42]

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[will1982]

This is really old.

Is anyone still here?

Edit: Read the story, through the whole thing I was like:

What the hell?

[Frikishzooka]

Oh dear merciful Celestia, I was imagining this in my mind. Oh the sexyness and the horror.

[Pidgeons]

Too little plot development, the wording in places could use a bit of work, Scootaloo's presence in the story seemed to have no purpose whatsoever,and way, way, way too much saliva.

[lmagine]

It went to fast and I think you could've not added the Scootaloo part also Twilight seemed a bit OOC. Sorry, you get a dislike but the one thing you could do is maybe someday rewrite it.

[ultrako]

If this action got any...saucier...this would have to be mature content.That was on the line!

[WubCakes]

SOUND BARRIER(sorta OK, needs more imporvemt

[Daring Cammie Do]

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noun
1.
unlawful sexual intercourse or any other sexual penetration of the vagina, anus, or mouth of another person, with or without force, by a sex organ, other body part, or foreign object, without the consent of the victim.

[Orphan]

The comments on this story are hilarious! The story though? It isn’t sexy, has no plot, too much focus on spit, and all three characters were OOC at least a bit. Also, why did you put Scootaloo in there? Without a plot she’s useless, and you have none