When a human in Equestria attempts suicide, the ponies who shunned him are forced to care for him in Ponyville Hospital.
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And the shit's about to hit the fan.
Twilight. You're fucked.
THIS STORY MAKES MY FEELS GO CRAZY. Seriously, by the end of this chapter, my heart was in my stomach because of how much I want to find out what happens next. YOU'RE STORY IS AMAZING.
Please please continue soon!
Celestia needs to be angry with Twilight...I'm not talking disappointed but all out seething anger.
Well guess the fuck what, YOU SPECIESIST CUNT. Here's the outcome.
Now take this realization and fucking CHOKE on it.
So, Celestia's going to find out what happened to him?
Gunna be good.
Wow, aint that something. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Good job, Twilight -as usual.
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This. Make her regret it. But hey, at least Twilight wasn't outright cruel, she was just indifferent. When does Rainbow Dash get her comeuppance?
4314673 It Never Really Ends: Making you hate your favorite characters since 2014.
4314698 You can say that again, you talented bastard.
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Oh... I'm sure that she will get her's soon enough.
Yes... Soon...
4314680 Sorry, but you're gonna have to.
I need some sleep...I'm still sicker than a porn-addict's hard-drive.
Ey yo, Twilight:
Great chapter, but I think it's incorrect to say this is from "the perspective of Twilight Sparkle". Isn't it more true to say that this is a third-person chapter? If it were from the perspective of Twilight, then you'd still be using personal pronouns.
In any event, TWILIGHT, PREPARE FOR THINE COMEUPPANCE!
4314685 forget rainbow dash i want to see what will celestia do when she learn the whole ordeal he lived after her sent him to most "Friendly" town in equestria how she will deal with ponyville as a whole
4314747 I don't get sick too often so I cannot empathize with you very much. Though I do understand porn on a hard-drive!
At any rate, take your time and get better
4314747 PLEASE make the next chapter come quickly.
i must see what happens, oh great author
Oh, no no... our beloved young princess isn't that cruel. I'm sure it was all just a horrible misunderstanding on Twilight's part. So unfortunate.
Mmm yeah, everything will be fine. Heh, yeah... Twitch
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If it was me, I wouldn't be surprised. Ponies reacted with fear and bigotry toward Zecora. Zecora. A being that, besides the pattern of her fur, looks exactly like a pony. Seems like intolerance would be the obvious outcome to me and I'm not several thousand years old.
nooooooo it cut off i need to know what happens
fucked
HAHAHAHA DO I REALLY NEED TO SAY HOW FUCKED SHE IS
totally fucked with a side of your fucked
not as fucked
I don't even fucking know
I hope to god she is fucked someway
THE POLLS HAVE BEEN ANNOUNCED
4314797 THE FUCK HAS BEEN DOUBLED!
4314772 Keep in mind that griffins and other races apparently didn't have any problems.
Zecora just didn't fit into the ponies' idea of what a pony should be.
Wait, let me try to understand here: Celestia sent Jason to meet Twilight...and Twilight didnt give him the chance to explain himself??? And this was a few years ago so....oh wow.....Yup; she's boned.
And yeah, I really want to see Celestia P.O'd. Like royally pissed off.
4314880 And Celestia never gave Twilight a warning about Jason's arrival.
TROLLESTIA STRIKES AGAIN!
4314772 But they learned no to judge a book by its cover, giving them no excuse
4314885 What?!?! Celestia never gave a warning about Jason, so all of this could have been avoided?!?! THat's not being trollestia!! That's downright sinister!! :D O_o?? That's twisted!!
4314913 i agree thats not trolling thats evil
4314769 thats not what i heard considering when celestia says she on her ex student
Shit just hit the fan so hard, there is no fan anymore.
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When Celestia says... what?
4314885 I'd rather go with Thoughtlesstia.
Ooo.... Twilight's gonna get it.
The elements of harmony...destroyed his skin? Or do you mean the wilderness? The everfree?
4314957 Wind, water, earth, fire, yadda yadda yadda. He was outside at all times, and it fucked with his complexion.
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Ah.
4314938 the ex student part
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This is nonsense to me. What did you mean?
4314964 By your powers combined, I am Captain, Blah blah blah, whatever :D lol
I'd dare say that Twi is about to get chewed out real good by a certain Goddess of the Sun.
4314983 i'm just talking about how she says ex student in which case she would be roasted alive ok
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Twilight being an "ex-student" has nothing to do with her being in trouble at this point. She is an "ex-student" because she is now a princess.
You rushed this a bit too hard. Ease up a bit. There's some stuff your not telling us, like what did twilight mean when she said "I've seen enough humans." It seems ooc for her to slam the door on someone, even if it is an alien. This adds more unanswered questions when she says that.
Even then it's still confusing when the reason Twilight slammed the door was because of total ignorance. If Celestia said it was an foreign creature then why did twilight assume a pony would be at the door. Also, (I keep bringing this up) how does she know what humans are?
I feel like you're holding back something that should've been said awhile ago or forgot to tell us something in between. I like the premise, you started strong, but it's waning. You'd think Celestia would check up on Jason when her student has been dead silent for 3 years and has not sent a letter confirming Jason.
Also, if twilight was expecting someone else, did she really wait 3 years and not say anything?
Well, the upcoming fireworks display should be interesting.
4315037 All will be explained.
...In the next chapter!
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*Shakes fist*
Vlaaaaad!
This story is a great follow-up to Ending.
The talk between Jason and Applejack was something I'd been eagerly awaiting, and even if we didn't get to read the conversation and Jason's retelling of what he'd endured, the fact that it happened still gives me a sense of relief. Applejack knows what happened, and Jason, even if he can't accept it at the moment, learned that she sincerely wants to make up for what she'd done. Having a connection with someone--even if they aren't quite friends--is one of the most important things for getting out of suicidal depression, and having someone realize how terribly they screwed someone over is somewhat cathartic from the reader's POV. I very much look forwards to how the dynamics between the two will change.
At the moment it mostly looks like Twilight is horrified over her mistreatment of Celestia's guest. I look forwards to seeing what the next chapter will bring... and to the eventual discovery on the parts of the others of the Mane Cast (particularly Pinkie Pie and Rainbow Dash) about just who they had been avoiding or harassing.
4315031 ok you win that is what i was trying to say
Can i get an explanation to the title of the chapter? Cause it does nothing but confuse me ...