When a human in Equestria attempts suicide, the ponies who shunned him are forced to care for him in Ponyville Hospital.
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Sick AND Tired. The best of friends, sadly they like to find somebody to party with.
4303049 This is going to be a long story, and most of the focus is going to be on Jason getting acclimated with the Apples for a while. If you're patient, you'll get your wish.
I've been wanting to say this throughout the entire story: FUCK YOU PONIES. WETGEITUGB4E95GTH49P5G54EUGB54T
(rage over. sworry)
THE PLOT THICKENS.
Was she seriously coming on to him? The hell AJ?
I cannot wait. I have high hopes for this story!
4303118 SHE WANTS THE MONKEY DICK.
No, but seriously. Just read and watch buddy, it'll all come together.
Stop making it weird, Applejack.
It's my human now and I'll snuggle with it whenever I want.
4303139 She's sneakin' in yo barns, snatchin' yo humans up...
oh ma gaaawd sequel to ending? im going to enjoy this :3
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Come with me
And you'll be
In a world of self-annihilation!
4303171 i.imgur.com/I3aSq.jpg
4303216 "...NOPE!"
~ Jason Wright
Goddamn I love this story. FOR THE LOVE OF CRIMINY KEEP GOING PLEASE!
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You're very well on your way to the position of Best Author Ever on my list.
4303241 I just take what keeps people reading shitty HiE fics and make it less shitty.
The protagonist would rather run than fight, but he won't just sit and take abuse. He's understandably slow to trust, but I try to keep angst to a minimum. He tries to be a nice guy, but he's flawed. Characterization is what makes MLP so great, so it should make fanfics alright too.
I like this story although I personally think the impact would've been better if he had just died outright, but nonetheless I'm really enjoying this.
Although, if you don't mind me saying... You're a great writer. Probably a majority of this comments section would say so, but take a break. I've seen good chapters from you and this is not one of them. It's really rushed and it goes from him stuck in a barn to snuggles, running and outright expressing what he's been though without really telling how he feels.
Take a break. I can tell you're tired. I'd be too so do yourself a favor and go to sleep and rest. Keep goin and hang in there. Faved, liked and followed.
This. Is. AMAZING!! I have never read a story where the human is ostracized and demonized like this without doing anything wrong. If there is another one please tell me. If not, oh well. This story is so good I don't think I will need a different one. Please update as soon and often as you can. Also, make sure Dash gets good and zapped for me.
4303332 Seriously? Check this story out. The man with two names if you like human demonizing, you'll love this story. Had me on the edge of my seat with every update. You'll love it.
4303305 I'd have to agree. I'm barely keeping my eyes open, let alone maintaining cohesive thoughts. I'll go to sleep, and rewrite the damn thing when I wake up. You guys deserve better than that.
4303409 As of right now it is completely one-sided and based on guilt, but yes there will be romance down the road. It'll just take a while.
4302803 You're right, he could do that.
Except he has no supplies, no help, and would have to cross a forest of terror and a steep-ass mountain on foot to get there.
4303506 As you'd find out later, Applejack had no idea what his daily life was like at the time. She starts to understand later.
So it seems like she was oblivious in all the pony ways of how their general actions of refusal would hurt an actual human, and now guilt's eating away at her like acid.
Good start on the guilt thing, Vlad, but that's not enough. I want to see Ponyville cry.
So are humans known around Equestria? Cause it seemed Twilight knew what he was.
4303118 I don't know where you saw her coming on to Jason. At all. All I see here is a distressed and frustrated pony being eroded to her soul by remorse.
This is actually mighty good. I like the pacing of the chapters and the character. Favorited instantly and i look forward to seeing more of you.
I also agree with Dry monkey, take a rest. I'm used to waiting weeks (or months) for chapters of my favorite fics. I would like to think that writing this story is as fun for you as it is for me reading it. It would be awful if you get burned out for pushing yourself too hard. It's a wonder how you manage to publish many chapters in just two days.
4303657 I was laying the groundwork for the story, trying to get enough material out so readers could know whether they want to continue or not.
Actually, looking at all the likes and favorites I've gotten in the last 48 hours, and being #2 on the "What's Hot?" list...I've fucking succeeded.
So thank you for your concern and I can't wait to get back to writing, but I'm gonna slip into a mini-coma for a while.
4303651 I'm leaving it open to interpretation for now, but it could be both. Whatever it is she feels for him, it is all based on guilt. And until that's resolved, no kind of relationship will be healthy between them.
4303605 When I saw that on the original one-shot, I took it as a reference to Equestria Girls.
Since high school is a horrible, horrible place and the student body is composed of aggressive, competetive, hormone-fueled humans that are still learning what "empathy" and "selflessness" mean, it's easy to see how Twilight could see humans as generally unpleasant. Why do you think she left Sunset Shimmer there after the battle? THAT was her punishment. Welcome to Hell, bitch.
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Nail on the head, mate.
I find myself strangely invested in this story, despite the fact I've never been a fan of human stories.
I like these short chapters being posted regularly. Each one is digestible and addictive. I hope you continue to post more so regularly. I look forward to the next chapter. Applejack is turning out to be a very interesting character, indeed.
Interesting, mostly I'm just trying to figure out what the hell is up with these ponies.
1) They know what humans are.
2) The idea this human is from "someone else" doesn't seem to cross their minds (give AJ's reaction to what he told her a chapter ago).
3) Humans aren't very well liked but not disliked enough for outright lynching or the royal guard treatment on sight.
Wunderbar! I want to see more!
Very interested in this story. You have my favourite for this
huh, if they're sick of humans, then humans must have come to equestria at some point.
This is fantastic! I love this series. On my favorites since Obsession. To be honest, I was looking forward to when "this" would happen. Sorry to hear about your sickness
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Wait, you mean the same human world that had a copy of all her friends, plus Twilight's own crush who did his very best to be helpful and friendly all the time?
That doesn't make any sense whatsoever. By the by, the downvote isn't mine.
4304603 It was just a theory. I'm not a huge fan of the movie.
Ah man, I love a good guilt trip. Nothin like a character falling into disarray after they've realised that they fucked up.
4304531 Read Ending again. Jason's suicide was blatantly an act of defiance, not submission. It's in his very words.
And don't forget that so far, every single time AJ turned her back, he's tried to run.
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Heh, I can't wait for Jason to verbally tear into Twilight for judging humanity based on her experiences in High School.
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I have to agree with this. Honestly it really feels like Applejack is just covering her plot for something she feels is her fault, instead of acting out of remorse. Not to mention the protagonist seems more like a set piece in his reactions, it would be more believable if he reacted more to what was happening and how he was treated. Any reasonable person would be calling bullshit on this sudden compassion.
You know what would be just great? If Zecora found out about how they were treating him. They're basically doing the same thing to him that they did to her but worse, ostracizing and demonizing someone they know nothing about, and making him suffer for it.
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Oh! It seemed I need to reread it properly, thanks for correcting good sir
Also I notice that I didn't receive the notification of your reply, I just rechecking the fic and saw your comment. Wonder why?
This is way, way better than I thought it would be. Although your protagonist has approximately the personality of cardboard.
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I don't know much about Zecora character but if she found out about what the ponies did to Jason in my head, she will Zebra-Rhyme-Fu the Ponyville and probably make that curse that Pinkie Pie though of Zecora at first time they meet.
This is definitely a fresh take on the HiE trope, and it even makes sense, given the way they initially treated Zecora (And even then, she at least is still a quadruped.). I definitely look forward to seeing more of this.
Well, at least she finally realizes just how fucking racist all the ponies are, for some reason.
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Mate, have you read both stories? The only pony to realistically KNOW what a human is, is Twilight.
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Probably he want answer why Applejack save him. Don't you want answer if example an enemy of your nation just capture you, torture you and abuse and when you commit suicide only he/she stopped you from doing it and later treat you, cared you and fed you. Don't it make you demanding answer for it?
In this case he want to know why Applejack save him which he found she felt guilty for what she had done (I think)
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Probably he didn't know about Equestria Girls though. I do notice that some people think that this fic think that ponies know about humans which is not which prove why Lyra don't know about human etc.
Reason why ponies outside of Ponyville reject of accepting him working is due to him being an alien being so they afraid it will ruin their business. Plus ponies also seem xenophobic. As for Ponyville, Twilight is a celebrity and a princess thus she is alpha mare and that also mean that if she ignore something, the rest will do the same. A bit like monkey see, monkey do.