When a human in Equestria attempts suicide, the ponies who shunned him are forced to care for him in Ponyville Hospital.
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Ladies and gentlemen, I present to you, the mandatory video-clip:
Hm. Interesting.
From the picture I take it that the cloak is enchanted. Great chapter.
Well THAT is a way to end a chapter...
you better not chicken out. far to many stories do this forgiveness stuff, where the ponies say sorry and it goes sunshine and rainbows again. It would be good for him and the story to leave Equestria. anyway good chapter though
Wow. Jason's a walking chew-out machine now, spreading the hurt and settling the dust without touching a single pony. I'm so eager for Twiligh's turn to come...
Hope you're feeling better, Vladdy boy. You had good news the last time, I wish you have more to tell us.
5254536 Yes, but that's just the cosmetic aspect of it. You'll see soon enough.
Erm... what? She wants him to take of his cloak? WHY?!
5254556 She's a pony. The most affectionate, touchy-feely species ever conceived. And she's Pinkie Pie. The most affectionate, touchy-feely PONY ever conceived.
Oh yes. There will be snuggles.
Whether he likes it or not.
EDIT: Well...I say snuggles.
Why? Does Pinkie want to see his scars? So no book then? Guess this guy has no plan. How will he leave? He has no money.
5254564 I'm half expecting the coat to pull a note out of The Darkness's playbook and unleash pony eating tendrils or something and generate guns or... something you know? At the very moment he tries to remove it.
5254520 Congratulations
5254568 Not thinking ahead seems to be a running theme for this idiot.
The forceful way she said "Take it off" at the end, right after his little rant and her being depressed, brings to mind far too many thoughts of unsavory things.
Yes I know she probably wanted to see his face, but damn if that ain't suggestive.
Anyway, awesome chapter, writer person. I hope to see more!
Pinkie strikes me as Jason's best hope for. . . maybe not a happy ending, but perhaps bittersweet.
Aside from Luna and Celestia, she is the only one to genuinely understand how hurt he is, and genuinely wants him to heal.
The idea of the two of them starting over. . . I think it would be good for both of them. Nice to think about, too.
I wonder if I need to put on my asbestos pants for this post. . .
Now I'm taking a wild swing here because batting isn't my thing but I would have to guess that cloak was enchanted, probably to enhance negative emotions/responses.
5254575 Nothing so dramatic.
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So.....'struggle snuggle'?
I like what you're doing with this story, just the general direction it's heading, and the character interaction is just wonderful, and spot on to the versions on tv.
Keep up the good work Vlad!
So when there will be more chapter? We haven't heard from you for some time so what happens?
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5254595 Now what would give you that idea?
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What? What do you think I am 'implying'?
5254629 Okay, now I really am getting a 'rapey' vibe from you... Is there something you wanna tell me about the next chapter you're gonna write?
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Nevermind about that, forgot to read yer blogpost.
Seeing how cynical Jason is, he should of just ended it at celestia, and luna, and discord. But I guess since he still cares for applejack, he still has a tiny bit of sanity, or inhibitions, whatever you want to call it....
He should of ended pinkie right there, along with the cakes...
I'm actually supporting Jason here. Pinkie is the one who deserves to die, Jason has suffered three years of absolute hell Because. OF. HER. OPINION!!!! Or, in this case, her 'pinkie sence' if you can even call it that...
Pinkie.... she, along with the others... ESPECIALLY the mane six: including celestia and luna.... Jason, you should of just killed them all... or, have Discord help out by giving his powers, ALL. of his powers to you. I think things would go better for you that way. BUT. lets just see what you have planned for the others. There is only twi, rd, fluttershy, RARITY, and princess luna, they all deserve anything you will do to them.
What sorcerous powers bely the magic of the cloak?
...was Discord trying to get him to murder them or I reading into him calling Jason "Jeff" too much.
Well......that just happened.
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I kinda expect this to happen to Jason(with him being Will) with one of the the ponies(my money is on AJ)
Okay I'm a little curious...
How are you going to make this guy a worthwhile anti-hero/villain if he's as dumb as a brick and mad as a rat?
so his plan is to explain to each element what they did to him, forgive him and peace out. interesting way to say "piss off" to someone. makes me very curious to see where it goes
5254629
I've been out of the loop for a while now, what happened to Rainbow Dash, again?
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well their is the sex tag, and dark. so there is that
5254640 Well...when life gives you lemons...
5254698 AND YOU FUCKING CAUGHT IT
Everything I do has a reason.
5254764 Man...
Been reading this since it started. JUST NOW saw that sex tag. So I guess what I was saying/thinking may actually happen?
... Nice.
5254768 By all means Vlad, continue with this. I'm thoroughly enjoying it.
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nah dude, it was twilights opinion, twilight fed all the ponies lies about humans. pinkie was just acting rationally based on her new found fear and her sense telling her that "somepony" not someone will be hurt by falling objects and the like. in all reality pinkie is also a victim cause she was lied too and acted out of character. granted shes not as much as a victim but shes still a victim.
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Now we're talking
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5254730 Every villain is an idiot.
Scar? Turned into a spoiled manchild right after winning the throne.
Freeza? "Oh hey, a saiyan. I heard something about those, something about killing me. Should I power up right now and crush his head like a grape while he's still in the healing-pod? ...NAAAAH, WHAT COULD POSSIBLY HAPPEN?"
Orochimaru? "Oh hey, this kid Sasuke knows I plan to steal his body in a few years. Maybe I should teach him everything I know about killing people.
5254753 Jason choked a bitch.
5254770 OF COURSE. FRIENDLY COMPUTER IS SUPERIOR TO HUMANS. THINKING OTHERWISE IS TREASON. TREASON IS PUNISHABLE BY DEATH.
Wait, hold on. What?
I...I didn't sign up for this! I think.
5254801 That's we need to create a separate moniker, a separate class. One that divides those who fail and those who deserve power, and earn it. I'm thinking it should have at least a little bit of every non-english major word for god and emperor. Like kahn, pharaoh, etc.
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5254851 Pinkie don't care. Pinkie don't give a shit. It just takes what it wants.
5254901
Logics iz abuhndent
Let's get it on!
5254928 Aww shit, I'm writing clop for Black Jesuz...
Yep, I'm going to Hell.
5254772 so that WAS a Jeff the Killer reference...