When a human in Equestria attempts suicide, the ponies who shunned him are forced to care for him in Ponyville Hospital.
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4941198 Then how about this one?
Heheheh. Get some Rainbow, you cunt
Do you have a third to keep me awake all night? :P
Damn shame that wasn't Twilight getting her hyoid fractured. And go Jason, reality-check these ponies one by one.
Applejack, that sick fuck. I seriously hope she gets spelled into feeling the hunger, pain, despair and insanity that have plagued Jason since day one, and still are. He's not a pet, you slut.
Also, eh, I kind of have to agree that she got what she deserved. Nearly killing the guy with lightning many times (even if from lack of knowledge, that lack of knowledge is at minimum negligent homicide) and she gets nearly killed while he's gone temporarily insane.
4941227 If by some miracle we get another in the next 6 hours, I'll drink my entire jar of pimento olive juice.
4941227 Better but I would still like it to be longer if thats ok with you
^_^
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quality over quantity
also
twilight is gonna have a field day
WHERE IS MY GLORIOUS VERBAL SMACK DOWN THE LIKES OF WHICH FIMFICTION HAS NEVER SEEN!!!
WHERE IS IT?
Just stop dragging it out already.
Just wait till the little purple bigot hears about this...
4941321 Well Jason did just choke out Rainbow Dash hard enough to put her in the hospital.
4941321 i haven't read the two new chapters yet but judging on you comment i'm not missing out on anything satisfying... :/
Two chapters in a row, I am impressed Vladdy. Go for three and we might have a new record.
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Which will be hilarious if Celestia makes the connection of Rainbow Dash and lightning leading to his near death experiences because of his lack of magic. Knowledge she knows because of actually talking with Jason.
4941321 I have to say this is one of the best comments I have ever seen. it makes me lol and it says exactly what im thinking. Also who let you in my mind
Is it strange I don't feel the least bit bad for Rainbow?
4941335 Just give it a shot. Trust me.
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4941345 Given how she has behaved in this story? Not really.
4941349 reading them this moment...
Ok, I take my words back. Two chapters at once, now that's worth waiting a month!
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So angry! But I agree. Less emphatically.
My blood lust's been getting blue balled for so long! I don't want anybody to die but god damn some punishment needs to be doled out.
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True. I suppose this is sufficient. Rainbow Dash is worst pony, after all
(Shots fired)
I just can't understand this...it's painfully clear that the mane-6 are the primary reasons for MOST of Jason's problems and Celestia isn't doing jack shit about it. The only one that has any real say at all is Twilight, on account of being a princess; the girls haven't gotten so much as a slap on the wrists for what they've done to a sentient creature. What happened to Rainbow Dash was nothing more than neglect on Celestia's part; if the element bearers weren't around/in the castle it's stands to reason that Jason would be a helluva lot more manageable.
All in all, glad to see new chapters, but some of this is getting somewhat annoying to read - some blatantly stupid decisions being made by a supposedly very competent ruler.
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Actually we're not really killing the planet. We're just killing off the resources that we depend on. Earth is gonna go on without us.
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Neither. both can be stupid.
4941375 Dragon sleeping in a cave, giving off smoke that could smother life in Equestria? Who needs highly trained legions of armored guards and two nigh-immortal goddesses, when you have a bunch of teenagers? GENIUS CELESTIA STRIKES AGAIN!
Tyrant unicorn king returns from beyond the grave, wielding dark magic that took both Celestia AND Luna to defeat the first time? Throw a teenage unicorn and infant at him! DAMN THAT'S A GOOD RULER!
Evil centaur-demon breaks out of Hell and threatens to enslave and/or destroy all life? Get me some popcorn, dis gon b gud...
Yes. Celestia is definitely a capable, competent, intelligent ruler.
DIE LUCKY CHARMS, DIE!
4941423 It's Chucky Larms!
4941279 If you don't drink it, can I have it?
And we're back with another chapter. Very nice. It's good to see another well spun tale in the works.
And now I shall create a summery of my theories and general input on my views behind the Mane 6. Keep in mind that it's based on what we know so far from the story and what is told in the TV series. Theory may or may not be true, but is based on facts and logical assumptions.
Twilight slammed the door in Jason's face because of her experience in the EQG universe. One of the possible reasons is that she saw the students there as bad likely due to a projected feeling of fear from school within Magic Kindergarten. While not hatred, she was fed up with humans and simply closed the door on his face without realizing her actions now carry weight as Princess of Friendship (Such a thing would have been normal by any other pony knowing humans negatively). After 3 years and now realizing her actions, she would try to justify her actions and paint Jason in a bad light in order to preserve the notion that she was right since a lot of time passed and was invested into knowing humans are bad. This includes mentioning any possible sign which would point to his dangerous nature like eating meat or trickery.
Applejack did what she did because she acted without thinking. She's a traditionalist as farmers are usually down to earth in that regard, doing things how it was done for years. This was shown in various Apple Family episodes and during winter wrap up. When she saw a creature she didn't recognize, she would first act on behalf of a farmer and run the creature of her property. Unless someone were to tell her otherwise or if said creature was doing something painfully off the norm like commit suicide, she would continue pushing him off the property every time he would walk towards it. Since there was no mention I could find of him meeting applejack outside of the property except when he was committing suicide, it would assume that Jason never met Applejack away from sweet apple acres.
Rainbow Dash's, because she saw him as a monster, malicious actions would fuel her ego in getting seen as a hero for getting rid of the monster, sate her desire for causing pain, and protect those she cares for. Not realizing that Jason was not a monster or that he was a fan of theirs, she only saw a strange creature and acted upon impulse. And because no one told her otherwise, she just kept doing it.
Rarity is a simple case. She saw something that wasn't normal or beautiful in her eyes and pushed it away without a second thought. It could be his appearance reminded her of Diamond Dogs or that because he wasn't a pony or something recognizable or colorful, she just pushed him away thinking he was ugly.
Pinkie Pie did her best to avoid him because of how strange he was. At first it was probably a reaction likely due to his unmagical body and her pinkie sense. However, perhaps a mixture of rumor, advise from friends and knowledge of what her other friends did, she accepted the idea that Jason should be avoided at all cost. It's not actually different from Zecora in a way. Though having a definite answer with Pinkie is very difficult.
Fluttershy didn't see him as a person(pony) because how different he looked, she didn't treat him like an animal because of how different he acted. She is likely scared of creatures that are intelligent enough to actually talk or communicate decently, especially ones she never seen or heard of before. After all, she'd be spooked by something which towered over her. It'd probably the equivalent to slenderman to her.
I would like to retract part of my last comment. Second chapter makes up for the wait....mostly.
I agree with Ariin. The hell Celestia? How did you live that long without common sense? Not following up on your work after that long makes it seem like she took a vacation or her age is doing things to her memory. I guess being friends with royalty means you can get away with anything too. And leaving him alone after his episode....I'm sure that was supposed to end well. I think she will drive me to drinking trying to understand.
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Nope, that title goes to Celestia.
4941420 Fair enough, though the show still portrays her as a wonderful leader -- and as terrible as I think it was to just throw Twilight at the countries problems, in the end it DID work. So, while it was a bad decision, it apparently DID work and technically credibility wasn't lost. ;)
Maybe it's just me but I feel like the problem and the method of solving the problem in this fic are common sense...though I guess that would defeat the purpose of the fic; carry on good sir.
Selfish bitch
4941478 If Jason dies, I don't have a story.
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I'm not berating you for keeping him alive, I don't expect her to go on with his wishes. Perhaps you misunderstood me. I was making a comment about a character, who you have set up to be a selfish bitch who feels self entitlement to everypony's favourite human. Celestia said she was the closest to him, but I would disagree.
I personally feel that Celestia is the closest to him. She's the one who's been treating him right, putting him in line when need be and also understanding his situation. Applejack on the other hand has about as much 'closeness' to him as a stalker, wanting to take care of him, look after him, make it up to him.
She's looking less like a competent thinker and more like a deranged crazy who's obsessed with him. I'm enjoying the story by taking everything with a pinch of salt, and your main dude seems to be alright by me, I'm just stating the fact. You know;
Selfish bitch.
4941501 Fair enough. Besides, you're right. She is a selfish bitch. Buuuut she's still my favorite pony, and though I can find absolutely NO way to make it believable, I want to ship AppleJase so bad it hurts.
4941484 would have been a pretty epic ending right there tho .
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It'd be more beleivable to ship him with Luna or Celestia, as they seem like the most level-headed of the bunch. Or Gilda, even, who has a common interest of pony loathing, haha. I wouldn't mind sitting down with you and thinking over it, but as I stand, from a perspective of someone who knows nothing of the story's future events; I'm unsure as to how it can be done.
I know that feel, though. I'm an avid reader of Akame ga Kill, and even though Tatsumi had his brotherly and sisterly figures killed off by The Empire and General Esdeath, I want to ship them soooo badly. Esdeath is a crazy chick, and man, I dig crazy chicks.
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She has a knife in her mouth. Ponies also invented knives. Plus if anything was in danger, it was the apple.
ok... hmm. that was good in all honesty. the 21st chapter wasn't really that much but the 22nd chapter was... well exciting.
i was glad that jason finally decided to fight for himself. pity it only made him look more of a bad (now twilight will have something to justi-fucking-fy her bigotry).
also, i feel bad it was dash who got hurt instead of twilight (if anybody deserves to be choked its that royal pighead twilight). but at least jason got back at dash for always frying him with lightning... i wonder what jason and rainbowdash's next meeting will be like.
tnx for these two chapters vlad.
4941475 In her defense, she just found out what happened. She was still trying to get all the facts, and to do that she needed all of them present.
Should've gone mountain vs red viper on Rainbow Dash's ass.
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I really like Celestia. (A little less is this story) Solar Empire FTW
(Insane amount of shots fired)
..Twilight Sparkle.
Her ignorance knows no bounds in this fic.
If she dares to call herself a scholar in this...
I would beat her in such a way that she will be reduced to NOTHING. In the only way it would truly hurt her...
I would prove her ignorance to the world, and expose her crimes.
Interesting. I think your going the "peaceful" route by your comments, but this is a great turning point if you ever wanted to go the "villain" route.
Also, there is only one way that I can see you shipping Applejack with the MC... stockholm syndrome. Which isn't really "shipping" in it's normal context, but its the only way I can see them getting together intimately on any semblance of consent.
Is Jason going to come out and reveal that he knew about MLP before getting plopped in Equestria? (If he hasn't told Celestia that is) --->Just curious, of course that would be a BIT of a spoiler, but it's a question going through my head right now. I'm imagining him recounting the things he used to love about the show and throwing the friendship lessons, especially Zecora's, in their face.
I grinned like a psycho when Jason caught Rainbow and started choking her. I want it to continue! CHOKE HER MORE!! MAKE HER SUFFER!!!
4941344 Stop it, the moon will get caught in the gravity of my ego