Dem Feels are killin

I feel like Dust when he couldn't save that Mudpot guy.

Wow, thanks for the feels, fucker. No but seriously I'm loving this story so far, great job.

4280415 ok thanks. Yeah because I thought this story was gonna be a perfect human is perfect and fixes imperfect world. So I'm looking forward to more of this story. But also wouldn't he know Equestria isn't perfect? He watched the show and while they say it's peaceful really theirs discord and chrysalis.

i wonder if he can have a chance to change it...

4284252 right. But aren't those villains kind of childish. I mean, chocolate rain? Not really a punishment. There are much more dangerous beings that the cameras don't show you,

4285158 Well of course, they have to keep the surface childish for a CHILD'S show. But what about Chryssalys? She had Celestia in that cacoon thing, what if the mane 6 never came through? Was she gonna have Celestia just sitting there? No. She's gonna A. Use her as a slave or B. kill her. And neither of those are very childish. And Discord. Yes, chocolate rain is childish, yes slippery roads are childish. But look deeper. He split the mane 6 up so they weren't freinds. So they were alone. And do you know other times people are forced to be alone? The worst people in prison, murderers and rapists and others. They don't let them socialize because that's humans do to stay sane. So they punish them by forcing them to be lonely. And even you said in your story, Andy didn't (try to) kill himself because he was hurt, not because he was almost mortally injured, but because he was alone.

Enjoying this so far. Will track.

WARNING! This comment will contain spoilers. Do NOT read this unless you have read chapter 6!!

(I had to delete my post, because I forgot to mention that. For some reason, every time I click edit, it crashes my page. So I deleted it, and pasted it back here.)

Ooh, them feels. Actually cried a little after reading Sweetie's death. I had discovered a new love (not IN love, but she was one of my favorite characters) which impacted my crying imensely. After each chapter, I am getting more and more impressed with you. I am looking forward to reading some of your other stories! Other than that, there was a few grammar and spelling mistakes here and there. But still great for being your first story! Also, I have a suggestion. Maybe Rarity thinks her sister's death is all Andy's fault. Hatred grows inside of her, and Andy needs to find some way to get her to like him again. Just a thought! Thanks for continuing this awesome story!

When s the next chapter coming out?

Nooooo!!!! Sweetie bell must live! U better make this a bad nightmare

Sorry bud no sad feels . i only feel sick
Hope for more happy stuff

Its sad that this story is dead. Will he get laid. Will he forgive himself for the loss of sweetie bell. Or will this end here and now with no update for 30 weeks rest in piece story.